magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

Koyal · August 2, 2003, 11:32am

***

ye tooti huwi sansaiN ye haraf haraf khya’aal
maiN soochta hooN k is baar kis k naam karooN?

taraashtay haiN sabi zakham apnay apnay-----sakhuN!
kisay sakoot pe kaar’hoN kisay kalam karooN

hazar shakal ubharti hai teri yaad k sath!
kisay mata-e-safar kis ko husan-e-shaam karooN

baghawatooN pe uter aieN khawaisheN meRi
kisaY ree’haaie dooN kis ko aseer-e-daam karooN

tujhay tu kher sanwarnay ko aienay haiN bohat
magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN***

amirbilal · August 2, 2003, 11:40am

very well said

SuraJ · August 2, 2003, 11:47am

KOyal ab main kia kahon :)

chand_chehra · August 2, 2003, 7:37pm

Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

wah bohat khoob :k:

Amarbail1 · August 2, 2003, 9:01pm

Good one …:k:

Dilsay · August 2, 2003, 10:55pm

Very nice

ullujii · August 3, 2003, 12:34am

bohot undaa

jasmeen · August 3, 2003, 7:59am

beautiful:flower1:

Amal · August 3, 2003, 1:46pm

Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

Wah Koyal saheba…bohat khoob:k:…bohat achi ghazal hey…thanx for sharing:)

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 3:47pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
KOyal ab main kia kahon :)
[/QUOTE]

kah daliey jo kahna hai ap ko sharmaiey mut..kiis se :)

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 3:48pm

thanks ** Amarbail...amirbilal...dilsay and yasmeen ** :)

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 3:49pm

Re: Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

thanks chand g

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 3:52pm

bhoot ka ** undaa ** poetry sec main uluji ye poltrey section nahi hia poetry sec hai

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 3:53pm

Re: Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

thanks Saheeb

SuraJ · August 3, 2003, 4:03pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

kah daliey jo kahna hai ap ko sharmaiey mut..kiis se :)
[/QUOTE]

ajee hamari yeh sharam hi tu ada hai .... jo logon ko hamra dildada karti hai :)

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 4:18pm

Really kis ne ye gustakhi ki ap k hazoor..

SuraJ · August 3, 2003, 5:34pm

ajee gustaakh duniya mein kam paida huwey hain kia jee

Anchaal · August 3, 2003, 5:36pm

zabardust :~)

Koyal · August 3, 2003, 8:47pm

koN?

WiseGuy · August 3, 2003, 8:52pm

Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

**

ye tooti huwi sansaiN ye haraf haraf khya'aal
maiN soochta hooN k is baar kis k naam karooN?

taraashtay haiN sabi zakham apnay apnay-----sakhuN!
kisay sakoot pe kaar'hoN kisay kalam karooN

hazar shakal ubharti hai teri yaad k sath!
kisay mata-e-safar kis ko husan-e-shaam karooN

baghawatooN pe uter aieN khawaisheN meRi
kisaY ree'haaie dooN kis ko aseer-e-daam karooN

tujhay tu kher sanwarnay ko aienay haiN bohat
magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN***
[/QUOTE]

Very niceeeee...
Hum say kahain hum tamam ker detay ghazal ko :)
waisay bohat achi hai thanks for sharing ;)