magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

[Koyal]

Re: Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Very niceeeee…
Hum say kahain hum tamam ker detay ghazal ko
waisay bohat achi hai thanks for sharing

ap a gaye bahar a gaye
hamari gazal tumam ho gaye

PS: zaida khush honay ki zarorat nahi i guess ap he rah gaya they reply walay

[ullujii]

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

bhoot ka ** undaa ** poetry sec main uluji ye poltrey section nahi hia poetry sec hai

ap quote karnay main dandee maar gye ho zara GHOOR SE DEKHOO main ne bohoot likha hai bhoot nahin

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by ullujii: *

ap quote karnay main dandee maar gye ho zara GHOOR SE DEKHOO main ne bohoot likha hai bhoot nahin

[Sohail_A]

:k:

[Daagh]

very nice koyal jee :k:

[DiYa]

nice

(K)

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by Sohail A: *
:k:

Congratulaion ur 5000k in ma thread,and thanks

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by Daagh: *
very nice koyal jee :k:

thanks

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

bohut khoob:k:

[WiseGuy]

Re: Re: Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

ap a gaye bahar a gaye
hamari gazal tumam ho gaye

PS: zaida khush honay ki zarorat nahi i guess ap he rah gaya they reply walay

jee tu bata diya hota hum pehlay aaker aap ki ghazal tamam ker detay.

Aur aap ghar aa ker bhool jaao gee, I knew it

Eik baar phir bohat hee umda ghazal hai, Masha Allah…

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
bohut khoob:k:

thanks Gkk..

[Koyal]

Re: Re: Re: Re: magar maiN apni gazal kis tarah tumam karooN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

jee tu bata diya hota hum pehlay aaker aap ki ghazal tamam ker detay.

Aur aap ghar aa ker bhool jaao gee, I knew it :p

Eik baar phir bohat hee umda ghazal hai, Masha Allah...
[/QUOTE]

lo agar pahlay a k ap gazal tumam kar daitey tu baiqe k log kesay partey..:p aur ghar a k bhooli nahi thei bz ho gaye thei and i thought k bata khatam kar chuki :)