I feel stranded
On rocky love beach
This forbidden feeling
I had swore not to get in
Caught me in its nets
My eye are raining
Sharp crystal drops
Cutting pieces of my heart
I tried to escape
But addiction throws
Acid burns on my face
Love is the like of pain
Lack of sorrow is a chain
Once tying my aspirations
Towards final alienation
To my great love
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Beautiful… Very nice… NOOR… Keep it up :k:
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Yeah!!! Awsome
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what does “keep it up” means?
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Thanx what does “keep it up” means?
Dahi- thank you
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Wonderful :k:
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Great usage of words... Keep writing :-)
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KEEP IT UP meanz.. that… Its Good… and Keep it GOOD 
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I’ll try:insha:
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Midst summer I freeze
Looking at this deep well
Arose in me a nut will
Will I fall farther in
Or inside this blind love
From me the farther he hides
The sharper nasty pain strikes
I bleed on those pikes
Carpeting the icecaps
On your past great heart
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:k:
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The sort of love you are portraying echoes the pain of expressing your desires to the one you are attached. The distance between you two makes you simmer.
Am I right?
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My dearest brown cloud
Flowing high in the air
Taught me not to burn chapati
On morning to drink hot cai
On little money to be happy
In a hundred square meter
At eight to live free
Happy poor city dweller
Ain't a haertbreacker
To Badal
i wanted to thank you all: Golden Scorpion, Dahi Phulki, ChiLLyMiLLy, Zalim Wadera and KhamoshNigahein for support!
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Freed by a warm breeze
Pretty nightingale sings:
'Tomorrow may never know
That yesterday was a joke
To the biggest theatre scene
Life is without strass and spots'
I never walk head up
I might stumble upon dirt
Nothing down is real
Neither truly eternal
This world is ethereal
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Very well said 
Send that cloud over here to teach us the same…
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Thats one philosophical and more meaningful than ordinary poetry. Keep writing. Your thoughts would synchronise with the rhythm of poetry one day. :k:
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so less plisophical:
Five letters in your name
You came like a knight
Glittering in the night
Now I feel you anywhere
Look for you in each breeze
From your search
There is no relief
I miss you
I wish you were close
To enjoy those nightless
Ocean like blue skies
And fairy waterfalls
From where I belong
Here is ice outside
But lava inside
I need you
You know as you call me
It hurts as a sword
My heart fastens
As soon as I see your
Five letters in a nick
I don’t know what it takes
To be your princess
I long for you
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its really good… :k:
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why are you surprised?