love?

[Black_Mamba]

Re: love?

@parissenoor

Five letters in your name

U mean…

1 2 3 4 5
M A M B A

[parissenoor]

Re: love?

@Black Mamba

U mean…

1 2 3 4 5
M A M B A

nice try…

[_kiran]

Re: love?

Nice wording…seems you are good poet:)

@parissenoor

Midst summer I freeze
Looking at this deep well
Arose in me a nut will
Will I fall farther in
Or inside this blind love
From me the farther he hides
The sharper nasty pain strikes
I bleed on those pikes
Carpeting the icecaps
On your past great heart

[shoaib_akhter]

Re: love?

wonderful stuff

[Numb]

Re: love?

really great...love it...we have so many talented people here :) ;)
you really know how to write...keep it up...lookin´ forward to see
more of your beauties

[Prince_Ali]

Re: love?

Great :)

[Jhuki_Nigahein]

Re: love?

:k:

[Janwar]

Re: love?

pyar ke lakeero par chal kar appnay hijar mai kia samayah .

dhoop dhal gaie fasano mai abb raat kay bhoojal kadmo nay humhara aks payah .

---

aik app ke khidmat mai peesh kartay hai appnay qalam say :)

so arz hai .

dhal kar chand mai tari surat ghaaray pani mai tera aks dekhay gay . . . . . . . or hilakar zara sa lehro ko raat bhar tera raks dekhay gaay :)

cant translate ask this to GS , he'll let u know :)

[parissenoor]

Re: love?

@Janwar

pyar ke lakeero par chal kar appnay hijar mai kia samayah .

dhoop dhal gaie fasano mai abb raat kay bhoojal kadmo nay humhara aks payah .

---

aik app ke khidmat mai peesh kartay hai appnay qalam say

so arz hai .

dhal kar chand mai tari surat ghaaray pani mai tera aks dekhay gay . . . . . . . or hilakar zara sa lehro ko raat bhar tera raks dekhay gaay

cant translate ask this to GS , he’ll let u know

GS please translate it for me:)