.. loug hanstay rahay ..

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 6, 2005, 4:46am

buhj rahay thay diyay, gir rahay thay shajar, loug hanstay rahay
doobta jaa raha thaa kese ka nagar, loug hanstay rahay ..

apnay khwabo`n kay raizay simatay hoay mein teray shehar say
jis gali say bhi guzra her aik mor per, loug hanstay rahay ..

tere yaadon ka aik karwa`n her qadam pay mera hum-rah tha
*mere tanhayee pay magar bay-khabar, *loug hanstay rahay ..

phir wohee sahnhiaA kal zameen per hoaa, barishon kay Khuda
johpra jal raha tha kese ka magar, loug hanstay rahay ..

uske nazuk se mohrjaye hoe hathalee main mehndi sulgte rahe
aur khusian manatay hoay raat bahr loug hanstay rahay ..

uskay ghum mein sisSakte rahe zard paton main chup kay hawa* *jiskay hanton per pehke hanse dekh kar loug hanstay rahay ..

<O:p
likh kar naam uska her cheez per hum tu ghar apna sajatay rahay
dekh kay ghar kay Jawaid dar-0-dewar loug hanstay rahay ..

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 6, 2005, 10:35am

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logh keyon hanstea reiy :halo:

coolpeepa · May 6, 2005, 1:51pm

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zabardast...

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 6, 2005, 10:07pm

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^ thanx .. (-8

tum zinda ho aankein pahr pahr ke dekhying .. kahan ho tum .. :@ .. baat mat karo mujeh say .. khabhi pm n mail ka reply kar diya kartay hain … .. loug is liye hanstay hain kionke tum mujhe tanha chor gaye ho .. .. :halo: ..

Ps: good to see you sweetyyy .. ..

Aryaan · May 7, 2005, 12:59am

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Very Nice Ghazal …:k:

muddii · May 7, 2005, 3:13am

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Loogon Ka To Kaam Hee Husna Hai Abh Kia Kiya Jaiy…

Nice one Thanx for shairin:)

Dilsay · May 7, 2005, 1:51pm

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Simply great

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 7, 2005, 9:23pm

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thanx everyone .. (-8

Koyal · May 8, 2005, 1:05am

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kitnay kharab hain aj kal k log hai na gazloo :)

NIce one :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · May 8, 2005, 8:26am

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Very Nice… Ghazal.. Thx for Sharing

reet · May 8, 2005, 9:18am

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bahot khoob Ghazal Ji...........

Shab-e-Hijar · May 9, 2005, 5:27am

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ahh bayhis logh :-/
nicee ghazal :)

Azad · May 9, 2005, 8:01am

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Shukar karain jo sirf hans rahay hain.

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 9, 2005, 6:47pm

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thanx everyone EXCEPT Azad ..

Azad · May 9, 2005, 8:25pm

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Aray bhai woh kiyon?

show_sha · May 9, 2005, 8:29pm

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aesa kia tha k itna hustay rahe :|

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 10, 2005, 2:40am

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azad and show sha: read the poem then it might make sense to you guys :=s

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 11, 2005, 10:15am

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han abih taq toh zinda he hoon mea nea e-mail kitne bar nahe keya ye pocho oar pher jo javab na melea to banda kea kare

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 11, 2005, 5:34pm

Re: .. loug hanstay rahay ..

^ i know you didn't mail me .. :-| so answe kis trha behjo ?!?! .. :o

show_sha · May 11, 2005, 11:17pm

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dont get offended j/k :k: