.. loug hanstay rahay ..

[_Miss_Meh]

Re: .. loug hanstay rahay ..

nice one gkk .......thnx for sharing....wonderfulllll

[Lamhay]

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gr8 ! gkk

[system]

Re: .. loug hanstay rahay ..

Nice... logoN ka to kaam hi yehi hai :-(

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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** thanx everyone .. ** -) ..

show sha aray no no ..i know you were j.k .. =)

[Dada_Abbaa]

Re: .. loug hanstay rahay ..

uske nazuk se mohrjaye hoe hathalee main mehndi sulgte rahe
aur khusian manatay hoay raat bahr loug hanstay rahay ..

uskay ghum mein sisSakte rahe zard pato`n main chup kay hawa
jiskay hanto`n per pehke hanse dekh kar **loug hanstay rahay* ..*

<O:p
likh kar naam uska her cheez per hum tu ghar apna sajatay rahay
dekh kay ghar kay Jawaid dar-0-dewar loug hanstay rahay ..

waisay to saaray hi shayr achay hain, but these are classic!

*Ghazal, *

ka collection... and her intellect are just incredible, I am really impressed by this young kid, mashAllah…
Always she post marvelous and high standard poetry! MashAllah

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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@Dada Abbaa

uske nazuk se mohrjaye hoe hathalee main mehndi sulgte rahe
aur khusian manatay hoay raat bahr loug hanstay rahay ..
uskay ghum mein sisSakte rahe zard paton main chup kay hawa* *jiskay hanton per pehke hanse dekh kar loug hanstay rahay ..
<O:p
likh kar naam uska her cheez per hum tu ghar apna sajatay rahay
dekh kay ghar kay Jawaid dar-0-dewar loug hanstay rahay ..
waisay to saaray hi shayr achay hain, but these are classic!
**Ghazal, **

ka collection… and her intellect are just incredible, I am really impressed by this young kid, mashAllah…
Always she post marvelous and high standard poetry! MashAllah

thankew thankew thankew for liking the poem n for all the tareef

[Dada_Abbaa]

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@ghazal kisi ke

thankew thankew thankew for liking the poem n for all the tareef

hehe to is main ronay wali kia baat thi :-p
I told u always, that your choice is alwyas greter than great! I really have no idea how u in such small age did that! really amazing…

acha Ghazal, aik shair sunain…koi gamgeen sa, jisay sun kar khush hojain sab!..

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: .. loug hanstay rahay ..

@Dada Abbaa

hehe to is main ronay wali kia baat thi :-p
I told u always, that your choice is alwyas greter than great! I really have no idea how u in such small age did that! really amazing…

acha Ghazal, aik shair sunain…koi gamgeen sa, jisay sun kar khush hojain sab!..

emotional bacha .. halo

zindage sub sikha dete hay ..

gamgeen sher humm thinking .. ok here are some .. i hope you like them ..

yeh subhe veraanian uskay juda honay say theen
*aankh dohndlaye hoee thee shehar dohndla na tha *

one more ..
humare roh per jub bhi azab utray gayein
tumhare yaad ko uske dahaal hona hai

another one ..
totay khwabo’n ke kirchion nay jub lahoo bahaya aankhon say
khwab mein kohee aankhon ko din raat jagana sehk liya

and last but not least ..
hum nay paspayee bhi dekhe hai Aa Dost!
asa`n nahi hai hara hoaa lashkar honaa

[Dada_Abbaa]

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@ghazal kisi ke

emotional bacha .. halo

zindage sub sikha dete hay ..

gamgeen sher humm thinking .. ok here are some .. i hope you like them ..

yeh subhe veraanian uskay juda honay say theen
*aankh dohndlaye hoee thee shehar dohndla na tha *

one more ..
humare roh per jub bhi azab utray gayein
tumhare yaad ko uske dahaal hona hai

another one ..
totay khwabo’n ke kirchion nay jub lahoo bahaya aankhon say
khwab mein kohee aankhon ko din raat jagana sehk liya

and last but not least ..
hum nay paspayee bhi dekhe hai Aa Dost!
asa`n nahi hai hara hoaa lashkar honaa

1. wah… aankh dhundli thi parr shehar dhundla na tha .. great

2. tumhari yaad ko us ka dhaal hona hai, really nice

3. khuwaab ki kirchion nay lahu bahaya ur aankh ko jaagna sikha dia… nice

4. nice too

haan sahi kaha Ghazal, zindagi sikha to daiti hay… sab kuch sikha daiti hay aur hamain majbooran seekhna parhta hay…

thank you ghazal for these shair hugs

[system]

Re: .. loug hanstay rahay ..

uske nazuk se mohrjaye hoe hathalee main mehndi sulgte rahe
aur khusian manatay hoay raat bahr loug hanstay rahay ..

uskay ghum mein sisSakte rahe zard paton main chup kay hawa jiskay hanton per pehke hanse dekh kar loug hanstay rahay ..

beautiful

[Azad]

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@ghazal kisi ke

** thanx everyone .. ** -) ..

show sha aray no no ..i know you were j.k .. =)

mushkil kaam hum se nahi hote.

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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**ata bahii: **my pleasure =D

vivlay: thankew yaar

**azad: **lazy