Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Hawaa khilaaf thi lekin chiraag bhi khoob jala,
Khuda bhi apne honey ke kya kya saboot deta hai
Saboot
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Cheating, na manzoor, koi aur shair kahein. see post 200 
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
aap ne mera shair pehle hi post kar dia.. chalen ye len:
Humain yaqeen hai Amjad woh wada khilaaf
Yeh umar kaise katey gi agar nahee aaya …
Wadaa
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Hum ruth jaye to manane ka wada kiya tha
Hum door jaye to bulane ka wada kiya tha
Aaj palko pe aansu bhar diye usne
Jisne zindagi bhar hasane ka wada kiya tha....
zindagi***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Zindagi se yehi gila hai mujhe
tu boht dair se mila hai mujhe
Gila
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Kisi se kya gila karna yeh dostoor-e-zamana hai
Naye jab dost miltay hain puraanay bhool jatay hain....
dastoor***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Maktab e ishq ka dastoor nirala dekha
usse chhutti na mili jisse sbaq yaad tha
Maktab
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Ye Faizan-E-Nazar Tha Ya Ke Maktab Ki Karamat Thi,*
**Sikhaye Kis Ne Ismaeel Ko Adaab-E-Farzandi.
karamat****
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Na daman pe koi dagh na khanjar pe koi chheent,
Tum qatal karo ho k karamat karo ho
Khanjar
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Woh jisko dost samajh kar lipat gaya tha main,
usi ke hath ka khanjar meri talash mein tha...
talash***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Mein kis k hath pe apna lahoo talash karun
K saray shehr ne pehnay huay hain dastanay
Dastanay
(I think dastanay is a difficult word.. If there is no other sahir where its used.. then** Lahoo** se shair post kar sakte hain)
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
**Jub bahar zor kee snow partee hai
haton per dastany paartey hain. :D
Bahar
**
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
What sort of Shair is this… 
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
dastanay ka shair toh aisaa hee hoga.
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
but he said u can use word lahoo if u dun find any appropriate shair...
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
**Likhi hai ghazal apni tamanna ke lahoo se
Kya gham hai jo sheroN ki sataaiish nahin hogee
Ghum**
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Zindgi ghum to deti hai sharik-e-ghum nai hoti
Kisi k dur hone se mohabbat kam nai hoti…
zindagi***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Zaruri nahi **zindagi**** apne liye hi pyaari ho,
*zindagi* me koi to**** zindagi**** se bhi pyaara hota hai
Zaruri**
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Zaruri hai bohat lehjay main narmiyan rakhna
Lachak Jin main nahi hoti, shajar wo toot jatay hain...
Shajar***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
**Kahin sehra kahin sookhy shajar achy nahi lagtey
Muje ab khwabzaron kay safar achy nahi lagtey
Sehra**