dosto, buzrigo, bhaiyo aur unki behno
Rule to yaad hai na 
wohin se shrooaat karte hain jahan silsila toota tha:
UK se shair aaya hai:
**Ajab Tamasha Bana Diya Mere Safar-E-Mohabbat Ne,
**Na Manzil Mili Na Zard Mausam Se Bachne Ka Thikana
Thikana****
Thikana se shair post karna hai 
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Zameer-e-saddaf mein kiran ka muqaam
Anokhe anokhe thikane tere
Anokha / anokhe
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
**Ishq karne walo ke anokhe andaaz hote hain
Lub khamosh aur aakhon mein hazaro raaz hote hain.
Khamosh
**
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Be-qarari meri daikhi hay to ab mera zabt bhi daikhna
itna khamosh rahoon gi k cheekh utho gay tum...
zabt***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
zabt lazim hai magar dukh hai qayamat ka faraz
zaalim ab ke bhi naa roye ga tou mar jaye ga....
zaalim
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Dost ban kar bhi nahi sath nibhanay wala
Wohi andaz hay zalim ka zamanay wala
andaz
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
kamal-e-zabt ko khud bhi to aazamaungi
main apne hath se us ke dulhan sajaungi
supurd kar ke use chandani ke hathon
main apne ghar ke andheron ko laut aaungi
badan ke karb ko wo bhi samajh na payega
main dil mein roungi aankhon mein muskuraungi
wo kya gaya ke rafaqat ke sare lutf gaye
main kis se ruth sakungi kise manaungi
wo ik rishta-e-benam bhi nahi lekin
main ab bhi us ke isharon pe sar jhukaungi
bicha diya tha gulabon ke sath apna vajud
wo so ke uthe to khwabon ke rakh uthaungi
ab us ka fan to kisi aur se manasub hua
main kis ke nazm akele mein gungunaungi
javaz dhundh raha tha nai muhabbat ka
wo kah raha tha ke main us ko bhool jaungi
sama’aton mein ghane jangalon ke sansen hain
main ab kabhi teri aavaz sun na paungi
Original Ghazal Of Parveen Shakir
next word:rafaqat
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
to poetry forum..
andaaz se shair post karna hai
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Kaisey andaz-e-shouq mein keh diya tum ne alvida,
jaisey sadiyon se tere dil pe koi bojh thay hum….
alvida***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Jany lagay tere shahar se to tujhy alvida na keh sakay.
Teri sadgi itni haseen thi tujhy bewafa na keh sakay.
Sadgi
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Kitni ajeeb judai thi ke tujhe alwida bhi na keh sakay
teri sadgi me Itna fareb tha ke tujhe bewafa bhi na keh sakay...
Fareb***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
tum aur fareb khao bayan-e-raqib se
tum se to kam gila hai ziyada nasib se
goya tumhari yad hi mera ilaj hai
hota hai pahron zikr tumhara tabib se
Gila
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Tareeq-e-Ahl-e-Dunya Hai Gila Shikwah Zamane Ka
Nahin Hai Zakhm Kha Kar Aah Karna Shaan-e-Darveshi
zakhm
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Shiddat-e-Dard se sharminda nahi meri wafa
Jin se dosti gehri ho, wo Zakham bhi gehray dete hain...
sharminda***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
**Na murawwat, na mohabbat, na khuloos hai mohsin,
mein tou sharminda hoon is daur ka insaan ho kar....
daur**
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
Muhabbato Ke Dour Khatam Ho Chukay
Dilo Me Jo Gulab They Wo Ansoun Ki Nazer Ho Chuky
gulab
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
***Chupkay se bheja tha aik ghulab usay magar
khushboo ne shehr bhar main tamasha bana dia...
tamasha***
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
tera mujse atut rishta hy
me tamasha hun tu tamshai
atut
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
kashmir hamara atut ang hai :cobra:
Re: Lafz ba Lafz- Poetry game
ek rishta jo atoot bun gaya tha
tutne laga magar banene ke baad
rishta 