Lafz Ba Lafz - Poetry Game - Jan 2014

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

mahool December 31, 2013, 6:48pm 1

Rules:

1- Poster will post a shair and ask the other posters to post a shair with a word in that shair. The poster who posts next shair (having that word) will then chose a word from his/ her posted shair and asked other poster to come up with shair (having a word used in that shair).

Lets understand with an example:
I post shair :

Na tha kuch to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota
duboya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to acha hota

And I ask to post shair having word Khuda… The next poster come up with this shair:

Muhabbat kar sakte ho to khuda se karo Faraz
mitti ke khilono ne wafa nahin milti

and ask for shair containing word ‘khilona’

2- Only two lines ashaars are acceptable . No Nazm, etc allowed

Simple

So post a shair having word ‘khilona’.

Now, game will start from last entry of previous Lafz ba Lafz game…

ehsan December 31, 2013, 9:33pm 2

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**Har Adawat Pey Muhabbat Ko Saja Kar Milna.
Rasm-e-Duniya Hai Haqiqat Ko Chupa Kar Milna.

haqeeqat**

muqawwee123 January 1, 2014, 5:01am 3

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Kabhi aye haqeeqat-e-muntazar, nazer aa libaas-e-majaz main
K hazaaron sajdey tarap rahey hain meri ik jabeen-e-bayniaz main

sajde

ehsan January 1, 2014, 10:12am 4

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**ye baat ab bhii nahin hai kisii se kahane kii
tamaam sajde tere dar se raayagaan guzare

Raayegaan**

muqawwee123 January 1, 2014, 11:51am 5

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Ye Khatm-e-Wasl Ka Lamha Hai Raigaan Na Samajh.
Ke Is ke Baad Wohi Dooryon Ka Sehra Hai

Wasl

ehsan January 1, 2014, 4:53pm 6

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**dil-e-muzatarib se guzar gaii shab-e-wasl apanii hii fikr mein
na dimaag thaa na faraag thaa na shakeb thaa na qaraar thaa

muzatarib **

Decent_Munda January 2, 2014, 3:52pm 7

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Badalon ki ghataayen kuch is tarah chaiiiiiiiiii
Kab Zindagi ka Surj dhala pata hi na chalaa

tarash January 2, 2014, 4:52pm 8

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is mein na to **muzatarib **hai aur na hi next word batya gya hai

tarash January 2, 2014, 4:53pm 9

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Dil e Muztarib Dile Gham Zada
Tere Chaar Soo Hai Ghubaar Sa

ghubaar

muqawwee123 January 2, 2014, 4:58pm 10

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jo rnjishain theen jo dil mein ghubar tha na gaya
kay ab kay bar galay mil kay bhi gila na gaya

Gila

tarash January 2, 2014, 5:06pm 11

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Mein Wo Phool Hoon Jo Khila Nahi
Mujhe Kisi Se Koi Gila Nahi

phool

ehsan January 2, 2014, 10:21pm 12

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**phir koi haath hai dil par jaise
phir teraa ahad-e-wafaa yaad aayaa
jis tarah dhund mein lipate huye phool
ek ek naqsh teraa yaad aayaa

Dhund**

Nain January 3, 2014, 6:49am 13

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**Zindagi bus meri ek dard ki bhari kahani hai **
**ghamun ki Dhund mae ye ansun ki deewani hai

Ansuuu
**

ehsan January 3, 2014, 8:40am 14

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**Aankhon Main Aansu Aaye Na Hote,
Agar Woh Piche Mudkar Muskuraye Na Hote,
Hum To Wese Bhi Jaan Bicha Dete Unki Raho Main.
Jo Unhone Bewafai Ke Jaal Bichaye Na Hote

Muskaraye**

muqawwee123 January 3, 2014, 8:43am 15

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ﻓﺴُﺮﺩﮦ ﭘﺎ ﮐﮯ ﻣﺤﺒّﺖ ﮐﻮ ،
ﻣُﺴﮑﺮﺍﺋﮯ ﺟﺎ
ﺍﺏ ﺁ ﮔﯿﺎ ﮨﮯ ﺗﻮ، ﺍِﮎ ﺁﮒ
ﺳﯽ ﻟﮕﺎﺋﮯ ﺟﺎ
ﺍِﺱ ﺍِﺿﻄﺮﺍﺏ ﻣﯿﮟ ﺭﺍﺯِ ﻓﺮﻭﻍ
ﭘﻨﮩﺎﮞ ﮨﮯ
ﻃﻠﻮﻉِ ﺻﺒْﺢ ﮐﯽ ﻣﺎﻧِﻨﺪ
ﺗﮭﺮﺗﮭﺮﺍﺋﮯ ﺟﺎ

Aag

ehsan January 3, 2014, 8:45am 16

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**os pade bahaar par aag lage kanaar mein
tum jo nahin kanaar mein lutf hee kya bahaar mein

bahar**

jiia January 3, 2014, 2:06pm 17

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post no:1 dekhen

no nazm allowed

tarash January 3, 2014, 5:11pm 18

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Ye Bahar Tujh Se Jala Kare
Sada Muskurate Raha Karo

sada

jiia January 3, 2014, 5:15pm 19

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Jo rehtay hain sada dil mein unhein dhonda nahin kertay,
Jo ruch jayain rag-o-pay main unhein socha nahin kertay,

rago pay

tarash January 3, 2014, 5:23pm 20

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shakhs

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