kuch nazmein

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 9:09am

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wow
kia baat haii....
tehreem rocks...

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 9:10am

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yes barish per dua karo k rehmat wali ho aaj kal kuch zyada he tabahi ho rahi hai anyways aap ke poetry again haseen thee jee

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 9:12am

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thankssssssssssssss dead soul jee aaj waqai main maza aya share kartey hoey now mujhey bhook lagi hai i will b back Inshalllah after the short brake:D

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 9:14am

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take ur time

redidentity · June 30, 2007, 9:15am

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Me Too.. Mujhe Tou Heavy Rain Se Ishq Hai..

Karachi Main To Kaafi Baarish Hui.. I Enjoyed Alot.. Buhat Bheega :$

Monday Se Dobara Expected Hai :)

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 9:25am

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hmmm
lucky guy

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 2:45pm

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*DAULAT
**Maine Usskay Hathoon mai
Ek Siyah Til Dekha
Aur Kaha
Yeh Daulat Ka Til Hai
Usne Apnay Dono Hathoon Mai
Mera Chehra Thaama
Aur Kaha
Haan Dekho
Mere Dono Hathoon mai
Kitni Daulat Hai.... *
~~~*~~~

Jhanjharewali · June 30, 2007, 2:55pm

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*sab khubsurat thayn....magar ye parh ke ik aah nikal ayee. bahot achi hae aap ki choice tahreem saheba. *

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 2:58pm

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buhat khob
aj ka din ap ki nazmon k naam

Main ne us say puchaa
Kya dhoop main barish ho saktee hai ?
Us ne kaha " haan ".
Phir hastaay hastaay ronay lagee
Aur dhoop main barish honay lagee.

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 4:43pm

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Main ne us say puchaa
Kya dhoop main barish ho saktee hai ?
Us ne kaha " haan ".
Phir hastaay hastaay ronay lagee
Aur dhoop main barish honay lagee.

bohat khoob deadsoul aap logon ke pasandeedgi ke wajah sey he share karney ke himmat hoti hai thanks alot

SJ · June 30, 2007, 4:49pm

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Main ne us say puchaa **
**Kya dhoop main barish ho saktee hai ?
Us ne kaha " haan ".
Phir hastaay hastaay ronay lagee
Aur dhoop main barish honay lagee.

one of my favourites :)

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 4:53pm

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INTIQAM
*us ne
Ajeeb Intiqam liya
Meri neendon se
Dosti kar k.... *

redidentity · June 30, 2007, 5:03pm

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So Touching..

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 5:17pm

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thanks Ahmer

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 5:19pm

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DIL JAHAN THA
**hum is saf mai thay na or na us saf mai
rastay mai kharay un ko taktay rahay
or chup chap aanso bahatay rahay
lout k aa ker jo dekha tu phoolon ka rang
jo kabhi surkh tha zard hi zard ha
apna pehloo tatoola tu aisa laga
dil jahan tha wahan dard hi dard ha **

redidentity · June 30, 2007, 5:24pm

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Khoob..

Aa He Basay Hain Aap Meri Rooh Main Ager
Mujh Ko Meray Wujuud Se Bahar Na Phenkeay

;)

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 8:18pm

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umdaaa

yon to likhnay k lye kia nahi likha me nay
phir bhi jitna tujhay chaha, nahi likha me nay
meray har lafz ki vehshat me hai umer ka ishq
yeh koi khel tamashaa nahi likha me nay

bheegiyaad · June 30, 2007, 9:57pm

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ooo how sweet i love this one:)

bheegiyaad · June 30, 2007, 9:59pm

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nice

tahreem_saeed · July 1, 2007, 5:40am

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thanks or bohat khoob contribution raha hai aap ka is thread main thanks again