kuch nazmein

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 6:12am

1:us ne eik baar mujh se poocha
ke batao
mujhe kitna yaad karte ho
mein ne kaha
bohat zyada
us ne doobara sawal kiya
ke phir bhi batao to sahi aakhir kitna
mein ne kaha
bohat bohat bohat zyada
mera jawab sun ker
woh zere lab dheere se muskurai aur kaha
ab mujh se bhi to poccho
aur jab mene poocha
to us ki muskurahat gehri hoti chali gayi
aur halka sa gulabi rang us ke chehre pe aake guzar gaya
us ne mujhe doobi nazron se dekha
aur phir palkein jhuka ke boli
pagal yaad to unhen kiya jata hei
jinhen aadmi bhool jata hei ***
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2:jo koi pyara sa buth tarasho
to soch layna
k aaj ka yeh haseen patthar
tumhari nazroon main davta hai
magar yeh andar say kokla hai ***
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***3:chaahato k mosem main..
zakham jo bhi lag jaay.
umer bhar nahein selta.
tum nay sun leya hoga..
shehar ki hawawon main.
wo jo aik dewaana…
aatay jaatay raahi ko..
raasto main milta tha..
ab kahi nahein milta… ***

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 6:23am

Re: kuch nazmein

buhat he shandaar choice
specialy 1st one

tum say milnay ka vaadaa tha
jee karta tha
jaisay mujh ko tarpati ho
wesay he tum ko trpaon
tum say aj na milnay jaon
lekin aj bhi dekho! janaa
meri mohabbat, meri zidd say
JEET GAYI HAI

deep_ocean · June 30, 2007, 6:34am

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very nice :k:

redidentity · June 30, 2007, 6:36am

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Nice..

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 8:38am

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thanks alot aap ke choice bhi kuch kam nahi hai beautiful sharing

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 8:42am

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thanks Ahmer

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 8:43am

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thanks deep ocean

_Moon_Corona · June 30, 2007, 8:45am

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nice........

_Moon_Corona · June 30, 2007, 8:46am

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:) nice

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 8:51am

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ek or nazm hai socha yahin share kar doon umeed hai pasand aye gee

Barishon k mosam mein
Tum ko yaad kerney ki
aadatein purani hain
Aub ki baar socha hai k
Aadatein badal dalein
Phir khayal aya k
Aadatein badalney se
***Baarishain nahi rukti...

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 8:54am

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THX TEHREEM

redidentity · June 30, 2007, 8:55am

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Beautiful..

Adatain Badalnay Se
Barishain Nahi Rukteen..

Simply Awesome..

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 8:56am

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THX

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 8:57am

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short but buhat achi
one of ma fav

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 8:59am

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kuch or yaad aaya hai aap ke nazar kar rahi hoon i hope k aap ko pasand aye
**meri aur uski ankhein **
**kitni milti julti hain **
**ik jaisee rengut walee hain **
**farq hai to bus itna sa **
**meri aankhaon mein **
**rung hai uska **
uski aankhain khyalee hain!

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 9:00am

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thanks dead soul yahan barish honey wali hai so socha kuch barish pey hojaye thanks again

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 9:02am

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thanks Ahmer aap ka taste bhi poetry main kafi acha hai

redidentity · June 30, 2007, 9:02am

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Shukria.. Blush

tahreem_saeed · June 30, 2007, 9:05am

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vo sitaara
**jo raat gaye
tootkar gira hai falak se
maine un kaanch ke tukhdon ko
is hatheli me band kar liya hai
tamaam yaadon me
tumhaari ek aur yaad ko shamil kar liya hai
ab is hatheli se jo tapkega
use lahu mat kahna................. **

deadsoul · June 30, 2007, 9:06am

Re: kuch nazmein

ohhh barish
i luv rainin
yaha nahi hoti

laakh doori ho magar ehad nibhatay rehna
jab bhi barish ho mera soag manatay rehna
tum gayay ho to sar-e-shaam yeh adat thehri
bass kinaray pay kharay haath hilatay rehna