Just arrived :~)
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Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat ruswaai ki
us ney choroN ki tarha meri pitaai ki :bash:
hum phir bhi roey nahi to kehney laga
bhala koi had bhi hoti hey dhitaai ki 
hum kaprey ki tarha pit’tey rahey sara din
us ney dhobi ki tarha hamari dhulaai ki 
kuch na bola jab nikalney ka rasta maanga
bas farmaaish ki thorri si mitthai ki 
bhool janey do ab nahi poocho hum sey
kitney dinoN tak chottoN par sikaai ki 
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(Amal)
Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…
:halo:
A M A L tabiet theek hai 
jis poet ki ghazal ka ye haal kya pitaye to woh dekh kar karay ga 
PS
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he he he he..............
lagta hai shadi k baad becharay kisi shohar ka ehwal likha hai :P
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Man kion nahi lyty ky tumhara hi ahwal likha hy:cb:
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Wah! Naqabily yaqeen. Amal SubhanAllah; Anwar Masood ky paiy ki shairi ki Amad hoi hy MashaAllah:hehe:
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…Bohat Umdaa Amal!
Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…
wel amal…mujhay bhi ek Shair yaad aa gaya
Maar Kha Kay Zinda Hain
Jaan Bohat Sharminda Hain
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not bad
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:D ....mae yahan bahot kam aati huun- magar aaj ayee toh Amal ki ek doosri rukh se mulaqaat huwee...meaning another facet of u.
Maza aaya bahot ji.
Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…
Munney miaN ye ^ kya hey? Typing-wayping bhool gaey ho kya? Is ki bhi kya zaroorat thi 
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Chalye agar yahaN kam aaney sey aap ka koi bhala hota hey to be’shak bilkul hi na aiye ta ke aur bhi bhala ho aap ka. Hum sab log aap ki bhalai ke leeye aek all Pakistan Duwaaiya Mushaera munaqid kareiN ge
Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…
goognews kiuN maar parrwaani hey Anwar sahab sey. Zar gap rakhey please, kitthey wo kitthey hum But thanx for liking this 
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apne andar koi shayar NA hone ka ehsaas pasheman kar jata hae is liye yahan sharma sharma ke aatein haen Amal
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Bhala is meiN pasheman hone ke kya zaroorat hey. YahaN kon sa har koi shaer hey? Hamaari hi misaal lelijeeye, hum kon sa shaer heiN, is parody sey to aap ko ilm ho hi jana chahiye...yahaN hum sab hi aek jesey heiN...Don't be pasheman :)
Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…
Ya Allah Amal itny sundar Avavtr k abyra ghraq kion kr diya ab tu lag rha hy ap amal nahi koi or ho
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^ Dil pe patthar rakh kar karna hi parra avatar change. Ab to soch raha hooN ke moocheiN bhi sachi muchi ki rakh looN :(
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@ pathar ju ap ko dil pr rkhna pra. Waisy kia koi Anjuman mil gai jis ny majboor kia ky yeh avavtar rakho:omg:
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ab u guess ap shaieri karna chor dain is avataar k saath asi shaieri he suit karey ghi jesi abhi ap ne ki hia.....:p nice one though am impressed k ap k under aisa b koi hai :p......wesay agar ap real main moonchiN rakh lain tu really suites u...mooch nahi tu kuch nahi moonchaiN k begaier admi aur aurat maiN kia faraq :p :D
