Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat...

[Amal]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat...

ab u guess ap shaieri karna chor dain is avataar k saath asi shaieri he suit karey ghi jesi abhi ap ne ki hia.....:p nice one though am impressed k ap k under aisa b koi hai :p......wesay agar ap real main moonchiN rakh lain tu really suites u...mooch nahi tu kuch nahi moonchaiN k begaier admi aur aurat maiN kia faraq :p :D

Ji bajaa irshaad farma rahi heiN aap...in fact ab to language bhi change karni parrey gi........ sai keya aey tu mutyaarey - qalam chad ke gandaasa pharr leya aey meiN .... hun sar KALAM karya karaN ga :D

[rkopra]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

[quote=“Amal”]

Just arrived :~)

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Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat ruswaai ki
us ney choroN ki tarha meri pitaai ki :bash:**

jab usay patta chala k main bewafa na thaa
meray zakhmon par usnay marhaam lagaee thi

[goodnews]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat...

Ji bajaa irshaad farma rahi heiN aap...in fact ab to language bhi change karni parrey gi........ sai keya aey tu mutyaarey - qalam chad ke gandaasa pharr leya aey meiN .... hun sar KALAM karya karaN ga :D

Amal ki traf sy Mar dhar sy bharpor shairi ka intizar hy ab tu:D

[tahreem_saeed]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

@Amal

Just arrived :~)

Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat ruswaai ki
us ney choroN ki tarha meri pitaai ki :bash:

hum phir bhi roey nahi to kehney laga
bhala koi had bhi hoti hey dhitaai ki

hum kaprey ki tarha pit’tey rahey sara din
us ney dhobi ki tarha hamari dhulaai ki

kuch na bola jab nikalney ka rasta maanga
bas farmaaish ki thorri si mitthai ki

bhool janey do ab nahi poocho hum sey
kitney dinoN tak chottoN par sikaai ki

(Amal)

hehhehe bohat maza aya perh k nice Amal jee

[NikamiJano]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

@Amal

Ji bajaa irshaad farma rahi heiN aap…in fact ab to language bhi change karni parrey gi… sai keya aey tu mutyaarey - qalam chad ke gandaasa pharr leya aey meiN … hun sar KALAM karya karaN ga

yani Qalam ko hath se chor k saR pe rakh lee’aa..qalam ki itni be-hurmati ap se bardasht kesay ho gayee…aik shaa’er ho ki ..jahaN ki cheez wohi pe saa’jay:halo:

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

v vgood… muge boht pasand ae amal bhae ache changng a rehe heyn ap myn oar poetry forum meyn:)

[AQ]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

@Amal

Just arrived :~)

Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat ruswaai ki
us ney choroN ki tarha meri pitaai ki :bash:

hum phir bhi roey nahi to kehney laga
bhala koi had bhi hoti hey dhitaai ki

hum kaprey ki tarha pit’tey rahey sara din
us ney dhobi ki tarha hamari dhulaai ki

kuch na bola jab nikalney ka rasta maanga
bas farmaaish ki thorri si mitthai ki

bhool janey do ab nahi poocho hum sey
kitney dinoN tak chottoN par sikaai ki

(Amal)

Yeh Pakistani Police saY mulaaqaat kee aap beeti lagti hai

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

[goodnews]

Re: Ku-ba-ku pheil gai baat…

@Anwaar Qureshi

Yeh Pakistani Police saY mulaaqaat kee aap beeti lagti hai

Tum pr bhi guzri hy lagta hy:D