KOI...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**bohat dur reh k bhi mere pas hai koi
na majburi,na bandhan,na he aas hai koi

gila kiun ker karun kisi ki be aitenai ka
na main laila na wo khaak urrata qais hai koi

barishon k mosam main sochta hun kiun usay
shayad koi bheega sa srapa ya bas ehsas hai koi

hanste huay jugnu lehraa gye aankhon main
inn aankhon ki kundelon main jese udaas hai koi

kiun be mol jana usay iss zaat ki hasti ne
bohat khas,bohat khas,bohat khas hai koi…**

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Nice

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Achi ghazal hey.

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bohat khas,bohat khas,bohat khas hai koi… :blush: acha :crying:

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bohat achi kawish hay......

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thanx g :)

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thanx.

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haaaw pata chal gaya???tumari birthday k liye likhi thi :blush: mera surprise khrab ker dia :hinna:

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:eek: aik tu koi ghalti nai nikali,ooper se achi k sath bohath laga dia…mere fot hone main 5 min reh gay :sadaf: jox aside m honoured paen :slight_smile:

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birthday pe to duain dete hain u ne ye kia dia :crying:

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**gila kiun ker karun kisi ki be aitenai ka
na main laila na wo khaak urrata qais hai koi

abso beautiful
loved it

keep going kush rahen...:)
sat**

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per tumhain tu wo wala suit chahiye tha apni hone wali sasu maan k liye jis k bare main mashoor hai k jo pehanta hai fot ho jata hai…sorry main aise kaam nai kerti :barbie:

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main waqi khush or heraan ho gai k ap ne meri poem pe comments kiye :eek:

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14 years mein saas nai hoti :naraz: :crying:

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nice. :k:

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hone pe aye tu 4 ghante b nai lagte,14 saal tu barri door :omg:

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thanx paen :slight_smile:

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very deep & heart touching ...

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hmmm.. achi kaavish rahi.. likhti rahiye :-)

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thanx both of u :)