kitni mushkil se bani thi dil ki kainaat na pooch

Koyal · April 10, 2003, 9:25pm

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Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Inn Baarishon say dosti achi naheeN Faraaz
Kacha tera makaan hai, kuch tou khayaal kar * ;) *

Mazaa barsaat ka chaaho tou meri Aankhon maiN aa baiTho
Woh barson maiN barsti hai, yeh barson say barasti haiN
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thanks sher sahi karnay ka jahan parha tha wahan asiay h likha tha :(

ankhin pighal gaa'eyN isay magmoom dekh kar
dil apni be-basi ki nadamat main jal gaya

chand_chehra · April 10, 2003, 9:55pm

very nice shair :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 10, 2003, 11:05pm

wah je kia kehnay hain:k::k:
mujhe nahi pata tha ke is topic mein itne Aal poetry chal rahe hai:D:k:
keep it up guys:k:
waise kia hum bhu post kar saktay hain kuch yahaan:)

Koyal · April 10, 2003, 11:23pm

sure gazal it’s for every one ab be do sher ka jawab sher main ye tu lazy ppl itnay dino baad a jatey

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 10, 2003, 11:30pm

so yahaan sher ka jawab sher se dena ho ga:(
kafe muskel hai na:bummer:

Koyal · April 10, 2003, 11:41pm

haan na it’'s not mushkil na dekhiey hum log be tu day rahya jesay ap idher udher likhti wesay yahan be

WiseGuy · April 11, 2003, 3:47am

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Chando jeee

WiseGuy · April 11, 2003, 3:48am

thank you ghazal kisi ke
yes of course you can join us

WiseGuy · April 11, 2003, 1:33pm

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *
thanks sher sahi karnay ka jahan parha tha wahan asiay h likha tha :(

ankhin pighal gaa'eyN isay magmoom dekh kar
dil apni be-basi ki nadamat main jal gaya
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You are welcome anytime :p

Jalaa hai jism jahaaN dil bhee jal gaya hoga
Kuraidatay ho jo ab raakh, justajoo kya hai ?

Azad · April 11, 2003, 1:40pm

Jalaa hai jism jahaaN dil bhee jal gaya hoga
Kuraidatay ho jo ab raakh, justajoo kya hai ?

Wah

Aag thay eb'teday ishq main hum
Hogay ** Raakh** intehaa yeh hay !!!

WiseGuy · April 11, 2003, 1:50pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Jalaa hai jism jahaaN dil bhee jal gaya hoga
Kuraidatay ho jo ab raakh, justajoo kya hai ?

Wah

Aag thay eb'teday ishq main hum
Hogay ** Raakh** intehaa yeh hay !!!
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HasarataiN raakh ho gayee lekin
Aag ab bhi kaheeN dabi seei hai

Azad · April 11, 2003, 1:53pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

HasarataiN raakh ho gayee lekin
Aag ab bhi kaheeN **dabi* seei hai
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Zara mozo say hatt kar hay

Roz kehtay ho keh adaab abaad
Hum na daba to qayamat ho gii

WiseGuy · April 11, 2003, 2:03pm

Ye bijlee raakh kar jaayegi, teray pyaar kee duniyaa
Na phir tu, jee sakega aur, na tujhko maut aayegi

Azad · April 11, 2003, 2:06pm

Chalain aap manna kartay ho to hum manna ho jatay hain :(

WiseGuy · April 11, 2003, 2:16pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
Chalain aap manna kartay ho to hum manna ho jatay hain :(
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Roya karaiNgay aap bhee pehroN isee tarah
ATkaa kaheeN jo aap kaa dil bhee meri tarah

Koyal · April 11, 2003, 2:26pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

You are welcome anytime :p

Jalaa hai jism jahaaN dil bhee jal gaya hoga
Kuraidatay ho jo ab raakh, justajoo kya hai ?

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dafnana dekh bhaal k hasrat zada ki laash ko
lipti huwi kafan maiN soo arrzo be hain

Dilsay · April 11, 2003, 2:42pm

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

dafnana dekh bhaal k hasrat zada ki laash ko
lipti huwi kafan maiN soo arrzo be hain
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Ya arzoo behi bohat hai magar maray hamdam
Wasala e yaar faqat arzoo ke baat nahi

Koyal · April 11, 2003, 2:44pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Roya karaiNgay aap bhee pehroN isee tarah
ATkaa kaheeN jo aap kaa dil bhee meri tarah
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rafeeqooN se raqeeb achay jo jal k naam laitey haiN
guloN se khaar behter haiN jo daman thaam laitey haiN

Dilsay · April 11, 2003, 2:46pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

rafeeqooN se raqeeb achay jo jal k naam laitey haiN
guloN se khaar behter haiN jo daman thaam laitey haiN
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Rafaqatain kabhi zanjeer e paa nahi hoteen
Na chal sakoo tu bechar jaoo dostoon ke taraha

Koyal · April 11, 2003, 2:46pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Ya arzoo behi bohat hai magar maray hamdam
Wasala e yaar faqat arzoo ke baat nahi
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wo prinda jisay parwaaz se fursat he na thei
aaj tanha hai tu dewaar pe a betha hai