Kia Farq Parrta Hay

Azad · December 15, 2005, 8:03am

oor…
Yon bhi hota hay
Achanak
Woh samnay aain humaray
Zara dair ko waqt …
tha’m sa jay.
Phir chal e makh’soos se rawan ho jay
Donu! …Nazrain milte hi
Aik saath musko’rate hain
Farq hi kia hay???
Pholoon ke khil’nay main
oor
ZakhmoN ke khul’nay main

Adab.

Pakeeza · December 15, 2005, 11:31am

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''Pholoon ke khil'nay main
oor
ZakhmoN ke khul'nay main''

Kuch tou Farq hay hi, phool khilnay aur zakhmon kay khulnay mein:-)
Thanks for sharing

Amal · December 15, 2005, 12:17pm

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Beautifully written Azad k: Barri gehri baateiN kehney lagey ho dost.

fara · December 16, 2005, 12:48am

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Azad.. Gud....Touched me deeply.

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 9, 2006, 3:42pm

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V nice.

hafsa_dudette · January 16, 2006, 2:53pm

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aisa khoob sher bahut arsay se nahi parha :)

Koyal · January 16, 2006, 6:51pm

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 17, 2006, 5:12am

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beautiful!

system · January 18, 2006, 5:57pm

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very nice

pholon kay khilnay say Rung phaylnay lugtay hain

Zakhoom kay khulnay say DERd berhnay lugtay hain

Dilsay · February 25, 2006, 2:44am

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Kiya faraq parta hai.... sach kaha....

PAKISTAN_ZINDABAD · March 4, 2006, 7:15pm

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lo ItnI sI baat ka Itna roola?mein batao..arey..
Pholoon ke khil’nay main
AUR
ZakhmoN ke khul’nay main
'‘I’’ aur u ka farq hai…SIMPLE..

Bholay_Bisray · March 6, 2006, 9:32pm

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:-) good one!

chalo_ab_faisla_kar_lo · March 6, 2006, 10:14pm

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bohat khob

AQ · August 1, 2007, 6:19am

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His last thread :-/

I miss him

anyone knows where he is?

If you are reading, come back yaar... I miss your "hummm" really ....

system · August 2, 2007, 9:08pm

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For a moment I thought he had returned... I miss him too... He even wrote me a 2 second poem on my nick :-(

hummm... Azad.. aap kahiN bhi raheiN.. khush raheiN..

NikamiJano · August 2, 2007, 9:34pm

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:( i thought he is back
he was heart patient too Allah kher karey ;(

AQ · August 2, 2007, 9:48pm

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really?

anyone knew him or had a contact with him?????

NikamiJano · August 2, 2007, 10:03pm

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may b almost 2 month NO pahlay kabhi kabhi messge a jata tha yahoo pe ab bahja huwa hia 2 week se koi messge nahi mila :(

AQ · August 2, 2007, 10:09pm

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is it okay if i can get his email id?

case_study · August 3, 2007, 4:22pm

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Azad,
thanks for sharing this poem
pretty intense monolog.
i will try to write one like such.
cheers!