Kia Farq Parrta Hay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bohat he Amazing.......
Gehraee hai poem mein.....
:) really very touchy

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Kiya baat hai yaar kahan hoo agar ya read kar rahay hoo tu wapis aa jaoo itni naraz gee behi achi nahi hotee...

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Ya Allah khair karey.. I hope he is doing fine! :(

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KN: He is fine.. I had a yahoo chat with him today.. (courtesy to Nikami)

:insha: He’ll be here soon :wink:

Skinny-fat
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inshAllah.. Thank you for the information :-)

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hummm .. in main se hum kisi ke qarz'dar bhi nahi or phir bhi et'nay dhair saray logon ne pocha ..Qayamt ki nishani hay.

Sub ka shukria.

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Azad, this short poem is extraordinary, unlike Urdu mohabbat poetry. You captured a moment. Kudos to you. Are you planning to polish it up - cutting a word or two, adding a word or two?

And suddenly he
appears before her.
Time stands still;
and moves quietly...

They look into each *
*others' eyes and *
*smile.

Flowers blossom.
Wounds open.
What's the difference?

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rkopra:
pasand oor tareef ka shukria- Zara nawazi hay aap ki. rahi baat kanT chanT ki to mushkil kam hum se nahi hote.

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praise is where praise is due. keep writing, not imitating like others - poem after poem reeking of rotten, made up love, lacking true sentiments - just words of love strung togethar, and calling oneself a poetry* Ustaad*.

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hummm

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Surprise?

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hummm, Jee oor sochne wali baat bhi.

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hummmm :hugz:

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Nice :k:

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Khub:k: