~Khwaab-e-A'arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Khwaab-e-A’arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee
LakeeraiN haath kee saNwar gayeeN, Tanhaaie bhee chaa gayee

Uss sang-e-dil kee yaad bhee mausam-e-eid ho gayee
eid aayee youN guzar gaiee, kay zindagi bikhar gayee

Cheray, Khilay huvay abb, lagtay haiN kitnay achay
Unn raNgeeniyouN maiN phir kiouN ghum kee leh’r biphar gayee?

Mera imaaN hay salaamat, ghum kiss baat ka karooN phir?
Qazaa Farz-e-Mohabbat ho gayaa, dair uss ko bhee ho gayee

Naa izhaar uss nay kiyaa kabhi, naa tau maiN kabhi jaan sakaa
Shikaayat uss ko ho gayee kay khataa mujh say yehi ho gayee :~)

Zindagi jo guzar gayee, ussay paas kaisay bulaoouN abb?
Seh’r-e-Zindagi guzar gayee, shaam-e-zindagi bhee ho gayee

Ik aur eid ab aa gayee, ik aur eid abb jaye gee
Kitni hee eidaiN aa gayeeN, ik aur eid ab guzar gayee

SukhouN ko tum samaiT lo, jahaaN millaiN inhaiN daboch lo
Anwaar jo yeh guzar gaye, tau hayaat dukhouN maiN lipaT gayee
– Anwaar

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Re: ~Khwaab-e-A'arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~

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*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *

Khwaab-e-A'arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee
LakeeraiN haath kee saNwar gayeeN, Tanhaaie bhee chaa gayee

Uss sang-e-dil kee yaad bhee mausam-e-eid ho gayee
eid aayee youN guzar gaiee, kay zindagi bikhar gayee

Cheray, Khilay huvay abb, lagtay haiN kitnay achay
Unn raNgeeniyouN maiN phir kiouN ghum kee leh'r biphar gayee?

Mera imaaN hay salaamat, ghum kiss baat ka karooN phir?
Qazaa Farz-e-Mohabbat ho gayaa, dair uss ko bhee ho gayee

**Naa izhaar uss nay kiyaa kabhi, naa tau maiN kabhi jaan sakaa
Shikaayat uss ko ho gayee kay khataa mujh say yehi ho gayee :~)

Zindagi jo guzar gayee, ussay paas kaisay bulaoouN abb?
Seh'r-e-Zindagi guzar gayee, shaam-e-zindagi bhee ho gayee**

Ik aur eid ab aa gayee, ik aur eid abb jaye gee
Kitni hee eidaiN aa gayeeN, ik aur eid ab guzar gayee

SukhouN ko tum samaiT lo, jahaaN millaiN inhaiN daboch lo
**Anwaar jo yeh guzar gaye, tau hayaat dukhouN maiN lipaT gayee**
-- Anwaar
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bhut khoob Anwar zaberdast :)

bhut khoubsourt alfaz say apni feeling ko express krtay hain app :-)
i wish k me bhi kabhi kuch likh sakon

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Re: ~Khwaab-e-A’arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~

Impressing :k:
kaheen tumhein woh walee traditional der to naheen ho gayee na? agar ho gayee hai to aur ziyada naheen der karna…ho sakta hai abhee bhee chance mil jaye, try karne mein kia hai? :wink:

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Re: ~Khwaab-e-A’arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~

bohat khoob Anwaar bhai :k:
:flower2:

PS: Qazza hi adaker lein ferz-e-muhabat Anwar bhai, kabhi kabhi qaza ka ajar zada mil jat ahay :slight_smile:

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buhet khoob :k::k::k:

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wah zabardast jawab nahin good work anwaar thanks 4 sharing such a gr8 poem!

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Re: ~Khwaab-e-A'arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *

naa izhaaR uss ne kiyaa kabi naa tau maiN kabhi jaan sakaa
Shikaayat uss ko ho gayee kay khataa mujh say yehi ho gayee :~)

Zindagi jo guzar gayee, ussay paas kaisay bulaoouN abb?
Seh'r-e-Zindagi guzar gayee, shaam-e-zindagi bhee ho gayee

SukhouN ko tum samaiT lo, jahaaN millaiN inhaiN daboch lo
Anwaar jo yeh guzar gaye, tau hayaat dukhouN maiN lipaT gayee
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v nice Anwar ap ki first gazal i really like it...bura mut manaiey gha :D
apnay apnay taste ki baat hoti na keoN...it's really nice aur cuz me formalities main nahi na jati haqeeqat main jo chez achi lagay us ki dil se tareaf karti reallity main rahti ..:)

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impressive :slight_smile: touchy n deep. AQ :confused:

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very Impressive…:flower1:

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**Mera imaaN hay salaamat, ghum kiss baat ka karooN phir?
Qazaa Farz-e-Mohabbat ho gayaa, dair uss ko bhee ho gayee

Naa izhaar uss nay kiyaa kabhi, naa tau maiN kabhi jaan sakaa
Shikaayat uss ko ho gayee kay khataa mujh say yehi ho gayee :~)**

wah!

Wonderfull is not the that could describe this!

it’s very very good:k:

I really like it…:slight_smile:

Thanks for sharing…:flower1:

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:)
bohat khoob anwaar:)

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very nicee :k:

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zabardast:k:

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It’s really nice! :flower:
keep it up!:smiley:

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:flower1:

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bhut achay:k:

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ab mein kya kahoun???

It’s really beautiful :flower1:

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Re: ~Khwaab-e-A'arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *

**
SukhouN ko tum samaiT lo, jahaaN millaiN inhaiN daboch lo
Anwaar jo yeh guzar gaye, tau hayaat dukhouN maiN lipaT gayee**
-- Anwaar
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zaberdest :k: :k: :k:

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:slight_smile:

Good job :k: