zabardast:flower1: 
wowwwwwwww… very impressive… :k: …
bohot hee zabardast hai 
..
Very expressive and bohut khoob.
haan khwaab main bhi ab i see bakraz 
see nayi EId jo aa gayi… 
… okay tht ws a stupid joke.. lol… i think itz the weather thtz gettin me today…
khair jokes aside thtz one heck of a poem
Mera imaaN hay salaamat, ghum kiss baat ka karooN phir?
Qazaa Farz-e-Mohabbat ho gayaa, dair uss ko bhee ho gayee
Zaberdast na! 
zabardust:k:
lajawab:k:
thanx for sharing:flower1:
nikii: When human being starts feeling from inside out and from the heart and heart feels the pain of the feelings, you dun have to learn to express yourself; ALLAH has given everyone of us quality of expressing our feelings.. some express them in negative sense and some don’t want to express while others when show their feelings are considered poet, writer etc. I am not a poet or writer… but when i find something what I write somewhat rythmic, I call it my “own” poem and when I write something that has flow of words and connection of sentences, I simply call it my “own” prose.. that necessarily does not make me a good writer or a poet, neither can i consider one myself…
What I write if understood by the readers, makes me happy that somehow, somewhere someone is atleast there to understand me:flower1: It’s the intellect and greatness of the reader who could get what I meant not how I wrote cuz if that would be the case, everyone must have been able to understand it.
Capricorn: thanks.. and LOL tum naheeN sudhernaa.. aisaa kuch naheeN hai:smack:
chodhry: qazaa kaa aj’r ziadah kab miltaa hay bhai? :S .. thanks for liking it
cuteepie: thanks jee
Lamhay: shukriyaa jee :~)
Koyal: saaf goiee kaa shukriyaa.. that makes this poem a master piece:p
pagaldeewani: shukriyaa laikin why are u confused :-S ?
Maheen2002: Thanks a lot (:
Swera: aap ko sirf woh dau sher passand aaye :-D?
rabika: Hay justujoo kay khoob say hay khoob tar kahaaN (~:
Shab-e-Hijar: phank you (-:
kino: daant kiouN nikaalay aap nay:D?
batameez: zameeN say kaun uThaataa hay sookhay pattouN ko? :~)
Jaan Lewaa: thanks jiger…
Farwa: kuch naa kaho… kuch bhee naa kaho.. jo kehnaa hay woh tau keh diyaa hay .. LOL.. thanks :-p
she: aap nay bhee kiyaa passandeeda sher quote kiyaa hay…?? i feel so proud naa :-p
smilly: smilly
~Sehar~: thanks a lot.
diyah: bajjo: thank u for everything
ayman: thanks…
Muslim_Queen: expressive? yeah it may be expressive …
Nickless: Paa jee .. LOL.. aap yahaaN .. :-p ?? j/k haaN! bahut saari cheezain qazaa ho jaati haiN… but some times regret karnay waalay woh hotay haiN jinn say qazaa huvee koie cheez and sometimes feel unn ko hotaa hay jo kabhi naa chahatay thay kay aglaa bandaa qazaa karay woh cheez
Jaan Lewaa: bhai kitni achi lagg gaiee :-D?? , dobaraa aanay par bahut shukriyaa..
ghazaalooo: thanks so much guRiyaa…
payee jee, I said kabhi kabhi,
dukh na ho ga tu sukh ka khaak mazza aye ga. galti na keroo gey tu sahih rahney ki afadiat keisye pata chaley gi, Aur Allah Mian sachey dil sey touba kerney waley ko bohat aziz rakhtey hein. es liye kaha tha ka qazza hi uss ada sey adaa keroo key ussey pasand aa jaye. samajh ayee ab???
achaa jee 
thanks
Anwar thanks
chlein jab me kuch likhon gi 
app ko barsdht karna paray ga:p
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Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
**Nickless: Paa jee .. LOL.. aap yahaaN .. :-p ?? j/k *:-D haaN! bahut saari cheezain qazaa ho jaati haiN... but some times regret karnay waalay woh hotay haiN jinn say qazaa huvee koie cheez and sometimes feel unn ko hotaa hay jo kabhi naa chahatay thay kay aglaa bandaa qazaa karay woh cheez :-)
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Paajee What a thought !!! Qasam say.. :'( I can so relate to that :'(
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*Originally posted by nikii: *
Anwar thanks :-)
chlein jab me kuch likhon gi :p app ko barsdht karna paray ga:p
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Welcome shimz :)
maiN intezaar karooN gaa :~)
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*Originally posted by Nickless: *
Paajee What a thought !!! Qasam say.. :'( I can so relate to that :'(
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me too :~)
true expressions anwar, zabardast, wonderfully written :)
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*Originally posted by Aceones!: *
true expressions anwar, zabardast, wonderfully written :)
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Thanks Aceones bhai :)
Re: ~Khwaab-e-A’arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~
Kia baat hai Anwaar bhai…Shair-o-shaaeri ka mujhay kabhi kabhi shauq utthta hai…Magar behtreen shair hain jo bold kiye hain…
:k:
Thanks a lot Lajjo :)
very nice:flower2:
Re: ~Khwaab-e-A'arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~
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*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
Ik aur eid ab aa gayee, ik aur eid abb jaye gee
Kitni hee eidaiN aa gayeeN, ik aur eid ab guzar gayee
-- Anwaar
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BOhat khoob AQ Bhai.
Waisay lemme count, I think 45 in your case :p
idher udher hi hoga:halo: dhoondna tumhara i mean aap ka kaam hey:bummer:
Re: ~Khwaab-e-A’arzoo Badal gayey, nayii Eid jo aa gayee~
zabardast :k: