Ali, good poem.
i wrote this as your poem inspired.
mager, aye khiyal
inhi ba himet patoon
mey chupa chatha hey, aik shejr per
ashiyan tumhara,
yoon jo pashaan hey wohh,
la perwah havaooon kee simet
ger laut ayey,
tow iss sey lapt jaein, yey pathey sarey
keye inhi sebz-zard patoon ney
iss ko ragib kiya,
aur wohh kyoon khoya, lau ka shejr
jis per yeye patey, jeisey azal sey
tiyaar hoon, inn serdiyoon kee dhoop mey,
iss ko lazawaal narm garmee diyey
kabhee na door jayey wohh phir,
kabhee na door jayey,
goya yey isi keye liyeye hein
isi keye liyey hein..
mager, yeye aur baat hey,
key chahey wohh jaan payey ya na jaan payeye..
