KEH AB TUM LAOT AO NA...

Shazia_Arif · September 23, 2009, 7:11am

Kabhi jab yaad atay ho
Bohat he yaad atay ho
Ye jivan veeran pairh lagta hai
Ghamon ka dhair lagta hai
Kay jis ke pate aangan main
Be-simt se urte hain
Wo chup chaap meri tarah
Bichrna sehte rehte hain
Keh kab tak yaad ban kar tum
Inn sanson main sisko gay
Wo pyara saaz ban ker tum
Kaho kab tak yun chehko gay
Ye kya acha khyal hai
Kay tum ko bhool jaon main
Per la-chaar hun tab tak
Keh uljha khaar hun tab tak
Jo toota na chubh saka
Apni hasti bhi kho baitha
Wo jis pe phool haste hain
Keh ab hamwaar rste hain
Keh ab tum laot ao na
Keh ab tum laot ao na…

rajey · September 23, 2009, 7:14am

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आपकी लाईन्*स बेहतरीन अहसास कराती हैं ........

rajey · September 23, 2009, 7:22am

मैं अभी भी उन राहों पर
सूखे पत्*तों सा उड्ता हूं
जिन राहों पर आखिर बार
तुम मुझे तोड् कर फेंक गए

मेरी आंखों में तुम ही तुम
मेरी सांसों में तुम ही तुम
मुझे खबर नहीं ऐ जादूगर
तुम कैसे मुझको देख गए

देख कुछ भी तेरे बाद नहीं
तेरी याद से मैं आजाद नहीं
दिल शाद नहीं नाशाद नहीं
लिख दीवानगी के लेख गए

Shazia_Arif · September 23, 2009, 3:35pm

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i m sorry i m nt aware with this language bt any how thanx they must b the words of apreciation.

terray_naam · September 23, 2009, 3:37pm

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Bohat achhey

KKF · September 23, 2009, 3:41pm

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Raje Ji...it wud be better if u use roman urdu/hindi so ppl can read...here, most ppl can't read or write Hindi...i can and i helped u once but i can't help you everytime and its not that i dun wanna.

Aryaan · September 23, 2009, 8:13pm

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Bohat Khoob Shazia..:k:

Shazia_Arif · September 24, 2009, 4:56am

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thanx terre naam & aryaan.

Shazia_Arif · September 24, 2009, 5:05am

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if i m nt mistaken u r talkin 2 raje bt u haven't tell me tht how did u find my poem Hashmat?

lofar_lafanga · September 25, 2009, 3:02am

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Good Shazia G

Shazia_Arif · September 25, 2009, 9:23am

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thanx L.L.

Precious_Khan · October 7, 2009, 11:42am

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Muhabbat Main Waapsi Ka Raasta Tou Hota Hee Nahi Hay :(

Nice Sharing Shazia :~)

Shazia_Arif · October 7, 2009, 3:03pm

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may b u r right khan bt ager sache dil se ho to rsta ho b skta hai.

LP · October 8, 2009, 1:31am

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nice :)

Sannan · October 8, 2009, 2:37am

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aik dil ko cho janay wali poem ..... shaiza u r sharing such a nice piece of ur poetry

Shazia_Arif · October 8, 2009, 7:47am

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thank u so much sannan 4 likin.

Shazia_Arif · October 8, 2009, 7:48am

thank god ap ne at last mujhe dhoond he lia & thanx 4 likin.

saadat_tahir · October 18, 2009, 6:11pm

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very nice shazia
well done

cheers

Shazia_Arif · October 19, 2009, 5:44am

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thanku so much tahir.

system · October 21, 2009, 2:00pm

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very sad sad poetry shazia g ....