Re: ...Kash...
Acha likhti hain fara jee hamesha likhti rahein AMin !!! khush rahiye !
Shukriya BL..qadardani ka - hum tu aam si baat kertay hain! aapko achi laggi shukriya!
Re: ...Kash...
Bohat khoob Kuch shair sirf boltay hain aur kuch shairo n k ashear boltay hain. Bohat hi khoob.
Buhat Buhat shukriya.
Re: …Kash…
fara ji acha khayaal hai :k:
waisy to chaand ko aa’ina dikhany waly baat hai laiken ye jo misraa hai
Taray aur badal kay sung
ye mujhe kuch out of place laga tha… could be my mistake as i m new to poetry…
i think abar-o-kwaqab kay sang might’ve worked better
Re: ...Kash...
ohh chacha ji...Thanks so very much...