...Kash...

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Rut bhee hay mehki mehki
Mosam hay bheega bheega
Chatki hay chandni bhee
Aur pas meray Tu bhee

Hay Sawan rut aur Hum Tum
Bheegay paird, fiza num num
Berkha rut aur dhanak rung
Aaj hain kitni khushiyaaN sung

Chand bhee khailay aankh macholi
Taray aur badal kay sung
Sun ker teri sergoshiyaN
Nach uthaa mera unng unng!!

Kash Koi SochuN Per Bhee Band Bandhay!!!

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Wah Wah Kia Khoob Farmayah !

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zabardasttttttttttt
kia jadugari hai k pehlay pora sama bandh dya aur phri keh dya k
Kash Koi SochuN Per Bhee Band Bandhay!!!
wah jeee wahhhh
jeoooooo

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Thanks...

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fara buhat achi shayeri kerti hay
shabash

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^^ did u say something… awaz ni ayee :phati: buri baat sheegum ankle!

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u edited it :hug: thankew thankew … i wont open that thread now, will be kind!! :blush:

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wah g wah buhat khoub ..... keep it up fara

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Thanks Sannan...

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This single line outweights the entire poem — if not the entier collection, you have shared with us so far.

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wah nice

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Kaala Baagh band banaa detaY haiN :)

nice poetry..

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Thanks Amal, Insha Ji and AQ ankle… aap nay tu meray dhaggay ki shobha berha di hay..:phati:

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Uska faisla tu abhee tuk pakistan kay awanooN main nahi tay huwa .. ap kon hutay hain Black Garden Band bananay wallay… :naraz:

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Suchi Main... THanks so much anyways... this is one of the first poems i have ever written - around ten years back... i found it in an old diary and thought i would share ... i dont write such daring stuff anymore!

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wow fara nice one

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kya baat hey aapki:-)keep sharing

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Thanks Noman and Gul!!!

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Acha likhti hain fara jee hamesha likhti rahein AMin !!! khush rahiye !

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Bohat khoob Kuch shair sirf boltay hain aur kuch shairo n k ashear boltay hain. Bohat hi khoob.