fara
February 25, 2007, 12:30pm
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Rut bhee hay mehki mehki
Mosam hay bheega bheega
Chatki hay chandni bhee
Aur pas meray Tu bhee
Hay Sawan rut aur Hum Tum
Bheegay paird, fiza num num
Berkha rut aur dhanak rung
Aaj hain kitni khushiyaaN sung
Chand bhee khailay aankh macholi
Taray aur badal kay sung
Sun ker teri sergoshiyaN
Nach uthaa mera unng unng!!
Kash Koi SochuN Per Bhee Band Bandhay!!!
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Fbi786
February 25, 2007, 12:48pm
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Re: ...Kash...
Wah Wah Kia Khoob Farmayah !
Re: ...Kash...
zabardasttttttttttt
kia jadugari hai k pehlay pora sama bandh dya aur phri keh dya k
Kash Koi SochuN Per Bhee Band Bandhay!!!
wah jeee wahhhh
jeoooooo
Cheegum
February 25, 2007, 4:48pm
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Re: ...Kash...
fara buhat achi shayeri kerti hay
shabash
fara
February 25, 2007, 4:49pm
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Re: …Kash…
^^ did u say something… awaz ni ayee buri baat sheegum ankle!
fara
February 25, 2007, 5:10pm
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Re: …Kash…
u edited it thankew thankew … i wont open that thread now, will be kind!!
Sannan
February 27, 2007, 4:19am
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Re: ...Kash...
wah g wah buhat khoub ..... keep it up fara
Amal
February 27, 2007, 4:28pm
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Re: …Kash…
This single line outweights the entire poem — if not the entier collection, you have shared with us so far.
AQ
February 27, 2007, 4:31pm
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Re: ...Kash...
Kash Koi SochuN Per Bhee Band Bandhay!!!
Kaala Baagh band banaa detaY haiN :)
nice poetry..
fara
February 27, 2007, 4:48pm
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Re: …Kash…
Thanks Amal, Insha Ji and AQ ankle… aap nay tu meray dhaggay ki shobha berha di hay..
fara
February 27, 2007, 4:48pm
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Re: …Kash…
Uska faisla tu abhee tuk pakistan kay awanooN main nahi tay huwa .. ap kon hutay hain Black Garden Band bananay wallay…
fara
February 27, 2007, 4:50pm
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Re: ...Kash...
This single line outweights the entire poem — if not the entier collection, you have shared with us so far.
Suchi Main... THanks so much anyways... this is one of the first poems i have ever written - around ten years back... i found it in an old diary and thought i would share ... i dont write such daring stuff anymore!
Re: ...Kash...
kya baat hey aapki:-)keep sharing
Re: ...Kash...
Acha likhti hain fara jee hamesha likhti rahein AMin !!! khush rahiye !
Re: ...Kash...
Bohat khoob Kuch shair sirf boltay hain aur kuch shairo n k ashear boltay hain. Bohat hi khoob.