Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say............

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

SJ March 27, 2007, 9:12am 1

Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say…

Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say…
Batao Kya Likhon Tum Ko
Mujhay Tamheed do Koi
Mujhay Ummed Do Koi
Naya Ek Lafz Ho Koi
Jahan Say Baat Chal Niklay
Maree Mushkil Ka Hul Niklay
**Batao Lahja Kaisa Ho **
K Tum Say Baat Karni Hai
Mujhay Thora ujala Do
Basar Ek Raat Karni Hai

aabla_pa March 27, 2007, 9:18am 2

Re: Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say…

wah

aabla_pa March 27, 2007, 9:34am 3

Re: Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say............

tum jahan jaao loat aana sanam
mein k tanhaaion say darta hoon

tujhsay milnay ko dil tarapta hai
apni ruswaaion say darta hoon

meri jaa'n saari baat keh daalo
teri khaamoshion say darta hoon

yaad aao na is tarah say mujhay
apni kamzorion say darta hoon

2 AM..and Tea

SJ March 27, 2007, 10:08am 4

Re: Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say............

Naa woh iqraar karta ahai naa woh inkaar karta hai
humain phir bhi guam'a hai wo humai'n say pyar karta hai

Humain yeh dukh k woh aksar kaee mausaam nahin milta
Magar milnay ka wada hum say woh har bar karta hai

aabla_pa March 27, 2007, 12:07pm 5

Re: Kaho Ab Kya Kahoon tum Say............

tere waaday pay jiya hum to ye jaan jhoot jana
k khushi se mar na jaatay agar aetbaar hota :)

hiba_no.1 March 27, 2007, 1:35pm 6

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bohat khoob

what is the first thing you notice?

SJ March 27, 2007, 1:50pm 7

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Bhool shayaad bohat baree kar li
Hum nay dunyaa say dostee kar li
Tum mohabat ko khail kahtay ho
hum nay barbaad zindage kar li

being_lonely March 27, 2007, 1:54pm 8

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Bohat touchy nazm hai :(

tum naghmaa-e-maah ho anjum ho tum soz-e-tamannaa kyaa jaano
tum dard-e-muhabbat kya samajho tum dil kaa tarapnaa kyaa jaano

deadsoul March 27, 2007, 2:11pm 9

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zabardast

aabla_pa March 27, 2007, 2:26pm 10

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:topic:

EEMAAN March 27, 2007, 3:09pm 11

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Very nice..

Muslim_girl_1 March 27, 2007, 8:36pm 12

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excellent:k:

Muslim_girl_1 March 27, 2007, 8:48pm 13

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WAH! kya baat hai!

mr.muncho March 27, 2007, 9:11pm 14

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dil ki nazuk ragein toot-tee hain
yaad itna bhee koi na aaey
waah g, keep it up folks

_MuNiYa March 27, 2007, 9:12pm 15

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lovely!

Precious_Khan March 28, 2007, 11:52am 16

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Buhat Khoob :~)

fara March 29, 2007, 10:03am 17

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Sonia and folks excellent poetry - dil khush ker diya!