kabhi kabhi shaam kay is pehar .. main soochta hoon ..(by me .. please comment!!)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Zindagi kay kuch pachtawoon ko pehli baar eik jagha ekhata karnay ke koshish ke hay main nay. So, I request all of you to please take out some time to comment and correct me. thanks

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** kabhi kabhi shaam kay is pehar, main soochta hoon .. garr main shauk-e-wsiaal rakhta, na tanha hota ..

wo meri har saans kay sang hotay ..
iss zindagi main, bhee rang hotay ..
garr main rangon main khail sakta, na tanha hota ..

meri zaat kay, sab dareechay ..
mohabatoon say, purnoor hotay ..
garr main haqiqat ko, dekh sakta , na tanha hota ..

meri zindagi bhe, muskoranay lagti ..
mujhay bhe mohabat, nazar anay lagti ..
garr main isharoon, ko jaan sakta, na tanha hota ..

udaas shaamain, or hamkalami ..
meri zindagi say, bohot door hotay ..
garr main qurbatoon ko, sambhaal sakta, na tanha hota ..

osi ke chahat, main jaltay jaltay ..
akeli rahoon, pay chaltay chaltay ..
garr main fasloon ko, samaet sakta, na tanha hota ..

yeah kaali raatin, yeah sooni ankhain ..
chahtoon ke roshni say, chamakti rehteen ..
garr main chahatoon ko, chahaa sakta, na tanha hota ..

yeah aaj, yoon is tarhaan say ..
bulateen hain kiyon, mohabat ke rahain ..
garr main mohabatoon ka, paas rakhta, na tanha hota ..

ajeeb sa dard, lahaq hay dil ko ..
kisi say milnay ke, chahat hay dil ko ..
garr main azal say, iss dil kee sunta, na tanha hota ..

hay aab museebat, har eik lamhay kee ..
guzarti nahi hay, guzaar nay say ..
garr main iss zindagi ko, guzaar sakta, na tanha hota ..

har lamha “Azam”, apni chahatoon ka, khayal rakhna ..
guzray lamhoon ke, ghaltiyoon pay, mallaal rakhna ..
garr main apna maazi, phir say sanwaar sakta, na tanha hota ..

kabhi kabhi shaam kay is pehar, main soochta hoon!
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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

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It's simply beautiful & emotional

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Very nice

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Keep it up

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Life is like a piano — what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

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Buhat khoobsurat khayalat hain Azam

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.. mashallah .. you have quite a beautiful way of putting your feelings/emotions - its a pleasure to read what you write .. thank you

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To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

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sighzz

niceeee :)

keep it uppp

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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....sochi paya banda gaya :)

keep sharing

"Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong."

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Azam Shahib yeh too app key qsar-e-nafsii hai joo inne achi poetry pay hum say bay adab loogoon say comments mang rahay hain…any how its great, keep it up

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Meiji

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NICE WORK!

KEEP IT UP, ITS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!

:~)

~~agar kisi sae mohabbat karo to us kae baghair tanhayi main rehna bhi seekho~~

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Bohot bohot suhukria friends

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by the way, I never wrote something of that length before in ma whole life.
yeah pehli baar mujhko itna lamba daura parha hay, shukar hay kay mujhay rozana itnay lambay dauray nahi parhtay :~)

it only happens once in blue moon

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so app logon ko mujhay ziyada bardasht nahi karna paray ga :~)

anyways thanks a million Ek Shairah, Perfectionist, m_isabah, chand_chehra, Gemini the Great, Muddi, ~TaNhAyAaN~ for your comments, it really pushed hell lot of confidance into me, I really appriciate that

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by the way me not a regular shair, I seldom writes .. but! I do like reading and listning to nice and meaningful things ..

waisay abhi tou mera yea ganay ko dil chaha raha hay ke “Sala main tou shair ban gaya”

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ne ways, before I leave, I want to say something for you guys :~)

Kabhi kabhi shaam kay is pehar ... main soochta hoon..

ajeeb shay hay, yea dosti bhee ..
rookti nahi hay, yea rooknay say ..

garr main saaroon ke, saath chalta, na tanha hota ..

doston ke zarorat, kisay nahi hay …
dost na hoon tou , mazay nahi hain ..

garr main yaroon say, pyaar karta, na tanha hota ..

meri zindagi say, sabak lay loo yaroo ..
jawani ko apni, yoon na bigaaroo ..

garr yeah sabak khud main seekh sakta, na tanha hota ..

“Azam” tou hay, srif shaks eik deewana ..
na aaya kabhi osko, rishta nibhana ..

kiyon kay …

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garr main ullu ka, patha na hota, na tanha hota :~)

Kabhi kabhi shaam kay is pehar … main soochta hoon!

theek kia Gemini the Great jee .. “sochi piya banda gaya” :~)

take care guys .. adios

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

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hmmm. bohat khoobsorat Azam ji. bohat achi khoshish.

aankhon ki is narm zamee'n pay
aap hi aap ug jatay hain
jin ko Aanso kehtay hain

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.. love the ullu ka pata bit .. thank you Azam#1

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To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

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gr8 two thums up

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Azam

It's beautiful. Umeed hai aapko iss tarah ke aur bhi 'dauray' parieN gaiy. :) Please keep sharing.

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Thanks a lot .. Sagar , m_isabah, Jaanaan and Sehar jee

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Sehar :

waisay main apna ilaaj karwa raha hoon . lets see faida hota hay kay nahi .. agar phir bhe aisay dauray paray tou for sure app logon ko sehnay parain gay

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thanks for the reply .. bye

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[This message has been edited by Azam#1 (edited April 19, 2002).]

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Agar aap ne apna ilaaj karva liya to hamein itne achay sher kaisay parhne ko milen gey

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Life is like a piano — what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

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yeah shair tumko acha laga hay kiya ???

"Azam" tou hay, srif shaks eik deewana .. na aaya kabhi osko, rishta nibhana ..

garr main ullu ka, patha na hota, na tanha hota :~)

well! aisay sachay shairoon say bachnay kay liay mera ilaaj bohot zaroori hay

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BEAUTIFUL POETRY AZAM Jii

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THX FOR SHARING
aur bhi likhte rehye aur hum parhte rahain ge

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“If you belong to Allah, rest assured that Allah will indeed belong to you”
“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”
“The best way to cheer yourself up is to try to cheer somebody else up.”
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Not Bad
Sach bolna achi aadat hai

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Us ke liye ilaj ki zaroorat nahin hai…
Keep writing

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Life is like a piano — what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

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meray kalam pay zamanay ke gard aisi thee .. ke apnay baray main kuch bhe na likh saka yaroo .. not by me

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shukraan Shaam-e-Firaq jee

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Bohot bohot shukriya Ek Shairah jee … aab main sach bolta rahonga

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chalo acha howa kaam aa gai deewangi apani .. vagarna ham zamaane bhar ko samjhane kahaan jaate .. by Qateel Sheefai **