not bad azam jee
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very good
mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!
very nice Azam bro.
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esp.
osi ke chahat, main jaltay jaltay ..
akeli rahoon, pay chaltay chaltay ..
garr main fasloon ko, samaet sakta, na tanha hota ..
ab aik mushwara
“rah-e-wafa maiN koee aakhree muqaam nahiN
shikast-e-dil ko muhabbat ki intihaa na samajh,
palat kay aa-ay ga wo bhi gaee rutoN ki tarha
jo tujh say rooth gaya hai usay judaa na samajh…”
Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…
wah kia baat hai bohat khub.koshish jaree rakhain umeed hai ALLAH say kai aik din appp baray shayer ban jayingey...
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Bohot bohot shukriya Dhoop sis ..
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app ka mashwara itna acha laga ke eik aur nazam likh dali
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Title hay “Dosti ka Pul-Seraat”
Umeed hay pasand ai ge ..
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Zara nawazi hay aap ki Married NY jee
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waisay dua karain ke pehlay theek say insaan tou ban jaon
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Thanks again ..
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Allah karay kay Azam #1 theek Insaan bun ja-ain
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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…
ab "Ameen" kahain sub .....
Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain.....
Pachtawey Sey Bhar Kar Koe Azaar Nahe Duniya Main
Jab Dil Lagatey Hain To Sochaa Nahe Kartey
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Irfan Ismail
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Allah karay jou meray insaan ban ne ke dua kar raha hay Allah osko bhee insaan bana hee day
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soocha nahi acha bura dekha suna kuch bhee nahi .. manga khuda say raat din tere siwa kuch bhee nahi ..Thanks RahGeeR it was a nice one
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really nice!!!
keep up the good work!!
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~~Khud ko yun mahsur kar baithi hun apni zaat mein
manzilain charon taraf hai rasta koee nahin~~
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Thanks Tanhayaan jee
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I’ll try to do it betta next time ..
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bhaahi jo kaam **hazoor* ne kiya wo to yaqeenan koozay mein dariyaa bandh karnay ke barabar hai...... aur khaaksaar ko lagtaa hai aap hazoor e waalaa buhat had tak kaamyaab hogay hain.*
aur share karne ke liye naachiiz ka shukriya qabool farmaaiye
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Bohot bohot Shukriya Mareez-e-Ishq sahab
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bass aap ke zara nawazi hay janab warna ham kis qabil
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itne umdah comments dene ke liay eik baar phir shukriya
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Ummmmm nice poem!! hehehe i know i bugged u for the meaning of almost all of the words...but u know wat?? it was worth reading and not just reading...it was worth understanding....beautifully written...And yeah i do know reply is kind of late...but me a dheeli girl...!!
The heart has reasons that reason does not understand.
~Jacques Benigne Bossuel
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Hello bachi … tum bhe aa gai yahan ??
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by the way, well said .. “it worth reading and not just for reading…but to understand” yaar tum tou akalmand hoti jaa rahi hoo .. pehlay jaisi nahi rahi
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ne ways thanks a lot for your comments and time
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keep smiling …
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hehehe…nahi mujhe ziada akalmand nahi honna…akalmand hogayi tu appki category mein kaise aongi?? aur waise mere apne words hain, kahin se chorri nahi kiye!! Humme bhi likhna aata hai
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shukar he tumhari choori karne ke adat tou chooti
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ne ways bachi tum abhi bhee hamari category main nahi aati .. tum thehri .. nai nai aadhi pooni see pagal .. aur haam tou hain .. pooray ke pooray pagal
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abhi waqt lagay ga tumko meray level taak aane main … so sit tight and wait for the rite time
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