kabhi gir jaa'ey tu palkooN se uthaa'ooN us ko

Koyal · June 22, 2007, 4:23am

***wo meray paas hai kia paas bulaa'ooN us ko*** ***dil maiN rahta hai kahaN dhondhnay jaa'ooN us ko*** ***wo mujhay itna subak itna subak lagta hai*** ***kabhi gir jaa'ey tu palkooN se uthaa'ooN us ko***

babri · June 22, 2007, 6:10am

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zabardest.

Jhanjharewali · June 22, 2007, 8:59am

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**aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! **

bheegiyaad · June 22, 2007, 10:03am

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very beautiful
but i didnt get this line
“wo mujhay itna subak itna subak lagta hai”
what does subak means???

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 22, 2007, 1:47pm

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^ I think its mean light, delicate, trivial, embarrassed, somthing like this:-)

SunnyBoy · June 22, 2007, 3:48pm

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:k:

Shab-e-Hijar · June 22, 2007, 5:00pm

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bary romantic romantic shair post horhya hain

NikamiJano · June 23, 2007, 2:37am

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bidies k seenay main b dil hota shab

deep_ocean · June 23, 2007, 6:35am

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awesome

muddii · June 23, 2007, 8:01am

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Hmmmmm suchi inna pass:blush:

Nice shairin:) Oor Koyal pay ik Shair Sunnain

Koyal Kali Hooti Hai
Jiss Pay Baith Kay Gaati Hai
Woh Aam Key Daali Hooti Hai:)

muddii · June 23, 2007, 8:07am

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Suchiii............mujhay nahee pata tha..........:)

muddii · June 23, 2007, 8:11am

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subak means fast, taiz

waisay yeh shair kuch yun bhee hoo sakta tha

Woh Mujh Say Itna Sabaq Itna Sabaq Parhata Tha
Kabhi Bhoolay To Danday Say Peetoon Uss Ko

ullujii · June 23, 2007, 8:13pm

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nicee

rashidali · June 24, 2007, 5:31am

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zaberdast

m.a.d.i.h.a · June 24, 2007, 11:15am

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great sharing!

C00l-m_nded · June 24, 2007, 11:20am

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Sweet!

Prince_Ali · June 24, 2007, 11:31am

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very nice :k:

Koyal · June 26, 2007, 3:41am

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THnaks PK:)

Koyal · June 26, 2007, 3:42am

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am not that sweet :D

Koyal · June 26, 2007, 3:43am

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Thanks m.a.d.i.h.a :) and welcome here:)