Just in case, if this very moment is all I have got

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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chodhry bhai. thanks for the Browning peom.
And he is really at his best in his monologues. Thats what he is famous for more than any other poet of English languge. .

Thanks again. :k:

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Re: Just in case, if this very moment is all I have got

very good jee :k:

keep it up :slight_smile:

sorry for late reply yar busy buhat :frowning:

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you are most welcome Mamba bhai jee, and plz keep giving us good sugestions for improvemnt.

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Re: Re: Just in case, if this very moment is all I have got

thanks Umar bhai, deir aaye drust aye, at least aap ney comments tu dey hi dye hein na.

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Its awesome, I can feel the purity of emotions, You know what !!! I think ,true feelings are like secret prayers.........................sacred and pure............thanks.

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*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
Its awesome, I can feel the purity of emotions, You know what !!! I think ,true feelings are like secret prayers.........................sacred and pure............thanks.
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Thank you Adhoorigazal for reading between the lines. It holds a very special memory. and yes there was a one fine moment of purity behind it. I was able to concentrate only on a single thought of her. I really wish i cd enjoy my whole life like tht.

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nice:k: keep it up!!

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thank you Laibah, its good to see you around. btw where you have bin? is everything ok? i mean aaj kal mousam bohat shararti hov ahay, merey saath bh i 2 weeks pehley aik sharat ker chuka hay esliey i am lil concerned.

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Beauuuuutifull…:flower1:

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thank you **&Passionate: **

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

thank you Laibah, its good to see you around. btw where you have bin? is everything ok? i mean aaj kal mousam bohat shararti hov ahay, merey saath bh i 2 weeks pehley aik sharat ker chuka hay esliey i am lil concerned.
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nahi jee sab khairiyat hai...mousam bhi meri misali seehat ka kuch nhai bigar sakta.....hehe

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*Originally posted by laibah_: *

nahi jee sab khairiyat hai...mousam bhi meri misali seehat ka kuch nhai bigar sakta.....hehe
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Masha Allah, bohat khushi hoi sun key, Allah aap ki seht hameisha kayem rakhey.

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:slight_smile: :slight_smile: patta hay kia abhi abhi uss sey lambi sii baat hoi jis key liye yeh poem likhi theee…:blush:

innna dil kia per ussey phir nahien sunna sakka…:frowning:

innna acha lagga, aaaj koi 2 months baad baat hoi thi uss sey inna khush hoon meinn kia batayooon… :slight_smile: pooora derh ghenta :slight_smile: per promise ley rhi thee keh dobara phone na kerna and i didn’t commit :smiley:

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Its a beautifull whisper for the lovers'ears...........

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kaun hai bhai :eek:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by KhanFarhad: *
Its a beautifull whisper for the lovers'ears...........
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thank you KhanFarhad

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:smack: bhai nahien hey… :mad: lerki hey aik :blush:

aur kia baatayien jinaab…ilfaaz saath choor deitey hein, zuban lerkhratti hey, zehn heirat ki bhool bhalyoon mein gum ho jata hey, aurrrr kuch sujhayee nahien deitaaa…:slight_smile:

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u r in big rouble i m sure :frowning:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Zakhmi Umar: *

u r in big rouble i m sure :(
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tu dua kerien na merey liey umer bhai

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chodhry sahaab the best comment about your poem has already been made by Black Mamba. Though I am not into English poetry and have no knowledge of tehnicalities of poetry, but i still can feel the warmth and the deepness of your poem. All the pure and priceless emotions have been packed into a single poem in an elegant manner, yet the rhythm seems to be insufficiently available in your poem. By any standard, to me, it's a commendable effort which highlights your potential. Keep it up :-)