[QUOTE] Originally posted by Amal: *
**chodhry sahaab* the best comment about your poem has already been made by Black Mamba. Though I am not into English poetry and have no knowledge of tehnicalities of poetry, but i still can feel the warmth and the deepness of your poem. All the pure and priceless emotions have been packed into a single poem in an elegant manner, yet the rhythm seems to be insufficiently available in your poem. By any standard, to me, it's a commendable effort which highlights your potential. Keep it up :-)
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thankyou Amal bhai everything u said means a lot to me. nowdays am so bussy not getting enuf time even to com on GS. n plz pray for me i need them.
