~Jo Chala Gaya Mujhe Chor Kar, Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai~

system · October 30, 2003, 4:37pm

***Jo na mil sakey wohi bewafa, yeh bari ajeeb si baat hai
Jo chala gaya mujhe chor kar, wohi aaj tak mere saath hai

Jo kisi nazar se ataa hui, wohi roshni hai khayaal mein
Woh na aa sakey rahon muntazir, yeh khalish kahan thi wisaal mein

Meri justajoo ko khabar nahin, na woh din rahe na woh raat hai
Jo chala gaya mujhe chor kar, wohi aaj tak mere saath hai

Kare pyar lab pe gila na ho, yeh kisi kisi ka naseeb hai
Yeh karam hai uska, jafaa nahin, woh judaa bhi hai ke kareeb hai

Wohi aankh hai mere ru-ba-ru, ussi haath mein mera haath hai
Jo chala gaya mujhe chor kar wohi aaj tak mere saath hai

Mera naam tak jo na le saka, jo mujhe qaraar na de saka
Jissey ikhtiyaar to tha mager, mujhe apna pyar na de saka

Wohi shaks meri talaash hai, wohi dard meri hayyaat hai
Jo chala gaya mujhe chor kar, wohi aaj tak mere saath hai

Jo na mil sakey wohi bewafa, yeh bari ajeeb si baat hai
Jo chala gaya mujhe chor kar, wohi aaj tak mere saath hai***

Man_de_Mouj · October 30, 2003, 4:41pm

Re: ~Jo Chala Gaya Mujhe Chor Kar, Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai~

Wah Wah...beautiful

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 30, 2003, 4:42pm

love to read this poem/ghazal :)

Swera · October 30, 2003, 4:45pm

Jo na mil sakey wohi bewafa, yeh bari ajeeb si baat hai

wah,

Thanks for sharing.

& Ramadan Muabarak, kafi rooz baad nazar ayiN ap:)

Khairyat to thi?

ASA · October 30, 2003, 6:02pm

Waaah...

chand_chehra · October 30, 2003, 7:16pm

beautiful :k:

WiseGuy · October 30, 2003, 7:32pm

BOhat khoob KhamoshNigahein.
Thanks for sharing.

Azad · October 31, 2003, 7:52am

Jo chala gaya mujhe chor kar, wohi aaj tak mere saath hai

hummm ... zaroor chorri ka hoga

system · October 31, 2003, 3:24pm

** Thanks everyone… :)**

Swera sis, aap bhi Ramadan Mubarak… Jee, bas exams mein busy thi, isliye kaafi din se koi posting nahin ki. Aap sunayein…Kaisi hain?

Dasht-o-Sehra · December 13, 2003, 12:30pm

Waah!

cuteAmir · December 13, 2003, 3:29pm

nicec to c u back.

                    good work.

cuteepie · December 14, 2003, 12:46am

superb :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · December 14, 2003, 3:09am

buhat khob :k:

Capricorn · December 14, 2003, 3:59am

Re: ~Jo Chala Gaya Mujhe Chor Kar, Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai~

Wonderful poetry :k:
PS:- Usko shayad apne ‘ikhtiyaron’ ka kuch pata na ho

system · December 14, 2003, 6:34pm

Dasht-o-Sehra: Aapne yeh thread kahan se dhoondh li? Thanks for liking

Thanks.. cuteAmir, cuteepie, Shab-e-Hijr & Capricorn…

Capricorn: Ager usko apne ikhtiyaron ka kuch pata nahin hai, to us se kahein ke kahin se pata karwa le…

Capricorn · December 14, 2003, 7:02pm

Kahan se pata karwale? Mujhe bataeingeen to kuch aapkee help kar sakoon shayad

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 14, 2003, 10:26pm

sigh

thanx for sharing:flower1:

system · December 15, 2003, 4:39am

Nahin na, rehne dein… Mujhe aapki help ki zaroorat nahin hai…

ghazal sis: Thanks…

Dania · December 15, 2003, 5:28am

beautiful

system · December 17, 2003, 2:30pm

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*Originally posted by Dania_2000: *
beautiful
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Thanks :)

~*Jo Chala Gaya Mujhe Chor Kar, Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai*~