jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN

NikamiJano · October 5, 2002, 7:44pm

kabhi tum ne ye bhe soocha
k tumhaRay dil garifta
tumhiN kitna chahteY haiN

tumhiN zindghi se bhaR kaR
jo aziz hum ne jaNa
so koi tu sabab ho gha
kabhi tum ne ye bhe soocha?

ye jo chaRa ghaR hamaraY
koi saa’et rafaqat
saR-e-sham mangteY thay
inhiN kia khabaR k hum ne
tumhiN sonp de haiN raateiN
tumhiN daan ki haiN ankhiN
kabhi tum ne ye be soocha
k tumhaRey dil garifta
paas-e-baam O dar akelaY
kisi shama-e-sokhta se
ye jo kar rahay haiN bateiN
tumhiN kitna chahteY haiN

tumhiN roz-o-shab k dukh maiN
kabhi bholna be chahaiN
tu kabhi na bhol paaieN gaiN
k ye ahad-e-zindghi hai
jisaY toRna be chahaiN
tu kabhi na toR paa’eyN gaiN

nikii · October 5, 2002, 8:17pm

bhut khoob :k:
kabhi bolnay ki koshish bhi mat karyee ga

Amal · October 5, 2002, 9:57pm

Re: jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa’eyN gaiN

wao…what a beautiful nazm:k:…thanx for sharing NikamiJi

Rameesha · October 5, 2002, 10:49pm

khoobsorat choice NJ :)

Jaan_Lewaa · October 6, 2002, 12:03am

nice:k:

_Janu_Jia · October 6, 2002, 1:54am

nice :k:

chand_chehra · October 6, 2002, 2:19pm

veryyyyyyy nice :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 6, 2002, 3:19pm

well a very beautiful nazam NJ thanku for sharing:)

HumaiN Andaaza nahiN tha app HumaiN itna zeyada Chahtii haiN :p

Capricorn · October 6, 2002, 4:08pm

Re: jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

tumhiN roz-o-shab k dukh maiN
kabhi bholna be chahaiN
tu kabhi na bhol paaieN gaiN
k ye ahad-e-zindghi hai
jisaY toRna be chahaiN
tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN
[/QUOTE]

Kiya baat hai, wah, khoobsurat, sundar, wah jee wah :)

Hum_Hain · October 6, 2002, 5:10pm

very nice!

NikamiJano · October 6, 2002, 9:41pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
well a very beautiful nazam NJ thanku for sharing:)

HumaiN Andaaza nahiN tha app HumaiN itna zeyada Chahtii haiN :p

[/QUOTE]

chalo koi baat nahi dair he lagi baat samj main aiey tu
thanks G-e-Tea

wesay Nikami k barey maiN andazay lagana zra mushkil hia ...:)

NikamiJano · October 6, 2002, 9:43pm

Re: Re: jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa’eyN gaiN

NikamiJano · October 6, 2002, 9:45pm

Thanks..nikii...Amal Saheeb...Rameesha g

jan lawa ,janu,Chando,G-e-Tea,capo and App be jo hain....:)

Spitfire · October 6, 2002, 11:34pm

nice one

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 7, 2002, 7:34am

bhooot achay

Pramod · October 7, 2002, 7:47am

Re: jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
kabhi tum ne ye bhe soocha
k tumhaRay dil garifta
tumhiN kitna chahteY haiN

tumhiN zindghi se bhaR kaR
jo aziz hum ne jaNa
so koi tu sabab ho gha
kabhi tum ne ye bhe soocha?

ye jo chaRa ghaR hamaraY
koi saa'et rafaqat
saR-e-sham mangteY thay
inhiN kia khabaR k hum ne
tumhiN sonp de haiN raateiN
tumhiN daan ki haiN ankhiN
kabhi tum ne ye be soocha
k tumhaRey dil garifta
paas-e-baam O dar akelaY
kisi shama-e-sokhta se
ye jo kar rahay haiN bateiN
tumhiN kitna chahteY haiN

tumhiN roz-o-shab k dukh maiN
kabhi bholna be chahaiN
tu kabhi na bhol paaieN gaiN
k ye ahad-e-zindghi hai
jisaY toRna be chahaiN
tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN
[/QUOTE]

bahot hi pyaari nazm hai bahna.
aap ne likhi hai ? agar haaN to daad kubul kijiye.
Anyways..thanks for sharing it here.

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 7, 2002, 11:24am

nikami jee boht boht piyarie nazm post ki hei aap nei :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 8, 2002, 7:34am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

chalo koi baat nahi dair he lagi baat samj main aiey tu
thanks G-e-Tea

wesay Nikami k barey maiN andazay lagana zra mushkil hia ...:)
[/QUOTE]

its mean Jo app nay kaha wuh sach nahiN thaa crying

system · October 8, 2002, 8:52pm

wow :)

NikamiJano · October 8, 2002, 9:02pm

thanks Spitfire…hearthacker and Mashoom sis…

Spitfire…welcome here…for u