jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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thanks and welcome here :flower1:

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*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

its mean Jo app nay kaha wuh sach nahiN thaa crying
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G-e-Tea......why crying ......yehi tu kaha hia k andaza lagana mushkil hia na.....keep smiling.......:)..such ho be sakta nahi be ;)

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *

bahot hi pyaari nazm hai bahna.
aap ne likhi hai ? agar haaN to daad kubul kijiye.
Anyways..thanks for sharing it here.
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nahi Pra g hum ap ki tarha poohnchay huwey kahan hia...is leay tu Nikami.....:(........thanks any ways ye aitbaar sajid ki hai....

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

nahi Pra g hum ap ki tarha poohnchay huwey kahan hia...is leay tu Nikami.....:(........thanks any ways ye aitbaar sajid ki hai....
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Arey bahna,

I was not born with pen in my hand. bas yuN hi kuchh kuchh likh lete haiN..aap log etna honsla afzaai karte ho ke aur likhne ko dil karta hai..aur aap "Nikami" kyon..areu jo ham jaisii tukbandiyaaN kar lete haiN wo aise kaun se sahab ban gaye...arey aap hamaare bahna ho..bas ..aur kya..khush raha karo...

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Re: jisaY toRna be chahaiN tu kabhi na toR paa'eyN gaiN

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ye jo chaRa ghaR hamaraY
koi saa'et rafaqat
saR-e-sham mangteY thay
inhiN kia khabaR k hum ne
tumhiN sonp de haiN raateiN
tumhiN daan ki haiN ankhiN
kabhi tum ne ye be soocha
k tumhaRey dil garifta
paas-e-baam O dar akelaY
kisi shama-e-sokhta se
ye jo kar rahay haiN bateiN
tumhiN kitna chahteY haiN

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excellent poem, Nikami ji!! :)

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thanks thanks ** Pra g ** is izat afzaie ka waran Nikami kis qabil and u know even though me Nikami but still:D :hehe: :slight_smile:

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Originally posted by *kashish: *

excellent poem, Nikami ji!! :)
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thanks kashish sis.......:)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

G-e-Tea......why crying ......yehi tu kaha hia k andaza lagana mushkil hia na.....keep smiling.......:)..such ho be sakta nahi be ;)
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yaeni yuuN kahiye na app

Kashmaksh meiN hi Rahay gi Zindagi apni :-P