Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden....
yea he write really good, maan it touches ur heart deeply...my right ventricle forget to push the blood into the pulmonary artery :(
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden....
ohoooo ab kiya hoga....are we gonna lose emm now bcoz of the problem that janu's poetry created??
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden....
naaa, it gives more more hope to live :D
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
mere paas bhi aik shair hai.. 
duur se deakha to kuch nazer nahi aaya..
paas ja ker deakha to kuch tha hi nahi.. 
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden....
KSA aisa sher parh kar tu mujhay bhi neend anay lagi hai
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
pooooooooorana sheeer 
listen to this:
pagli jo ayee youn hamaray darbaar may hazoor
jaisey koi gira darakht say aik sara huwa khajoor 
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
you didn’t complete it 
pagli jo ayee youn hamaray darbaar may hazoor
jaisey koi gira darakht say aik sara huwa khajoor
Bhet ker khai mein nai do teen angoor,
Emm ko rula rula kai chor na hai zaroor
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
yaar kiya hai beemari tumhay mujhay roulani ki
rula kar mujhay kiya faeedah kisi ki rouh jalanay ki
mana ham nay prefer kiya ‘‘Q’’ ko tum say ziadah
u just dont know tareeqah apni baat manwanay ki
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
mere naam ko badnam kar rahe ho:frusty2:
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
Shukar hai tum nai Q ko prefer kiya jaan,
Pehlai to woh tha ik acha insaan,
tumsai milkar ban gaya bohot bura haivan, (animal)
Aakhir tum ho hi ik churail jaisa shaitaan…
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
mai choorail jaisi shaytaan hi sahee
aja meray munaay kiya baat tum nay kahee
hain aakhir ko teri ustaad evilness mai
doodh walay doodh dou, na chayeh dahee
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
aww kitna cute lagta hai ghussay may
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
chup oyeeeee:smash:
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden....
hou jatti houn chup JL :(
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
Churail to tum ho, yeh baat sahi hai,
Likin meri ustad? Woh tu nahi hai,
Doodh walai ko kya bhulana, woh to hai mujhse dharta,
Mujhe chaye ya dahee deta, to tujh sai bhi buri maut marta…
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
dejkhtay hain kitni dair rehti ho:hoonh: n tumne tou kaha tha k tum yaha nahi aao gi kuch din:hoonh:
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
marnay maranay ki hi baat kiya karou
kabhi aakar apnay dil ki bhi baat kiya karou
doodh wala maray tou acha hai chiknay
evil kay dil aik jagah nahe hai tiknay
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
oye shaitaan
mujh per yey sher tum ne kis se pooch ker likha???
lo aik tumharay liye
EMM ki har baat shararaton se bhari hui
emm har kisi se jali hui, sari hui:D
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
kaha tou thaa
but ppl love khenching me here :halo:
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
EMM nay kiya jalna, jalnay walay nay khud boul diya
ham say pangah lay kar Pagli toun nay, sara jahan khou diya 
wah wah wah