heart touching poet 
by JL:
zindagi ek chahat ka silsila hai
koi mil gaya to koi bichar gaya
jissay maanga maine har dua mein
woh kisi aur ko bin maange mil gaya
Zabardast yaar 
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OMG that is great. :k:
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it makes me cry 
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shair ya phir mai:konfused:
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shair :(
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tumne tou hi kaha tha aur ab:smash:
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acha hai na, i wanted to cry but couldnt and this made me cry and now feelin much light yaar ..thanx :)
got more :D?
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mere huntoon k mehakte huye naghmo pe na ja
mere seene main kyi ghum palte hain
mere chehray par dikhavay ki muskurahat hai
magar dil mein udassi k diyay jalte hain
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EmMmMmMmMmMmM flood shuru kar dou idhar b4 it movez to potery:halo:
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zabardast yaar zabardast
it hurts yaars thanx yaar, let me hug u mera bacha 
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mera bhi baray din say ronay ko dil kar raha hai lekin
rona aa nahi raha…
Please share more …
kuch tau work karay ga na :halo:
Re: jaaan lewaa the hidden…
chehray par muskarhat tou rakho atleast:smash:
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wow. :k:
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aswome very well written , can explain yesterday's feeling :)
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…you just ruined the whole mood of the poem
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JL aur likhou, aansou bahir aana chah rahein hain :(
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^sowwy kino…
mai tau siraf dil ka ghubar nikal rahi thi.
JL
kaun muskurahat rakhay?
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oyeee auntio ja pyaz kato:hoonh: mai tumhara naukar laga hoon k ansoo anay chahiya:hoonh:
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ham jaa rahain hain phir :(