Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhuti Hai..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity September 12, 2007, 5:25am 1

Aik Chhoti Si Ghazal,

Kis Qadar Dilruba Andaaz Main Tuu Bolti Hai
Teri Awaz Meray Kaan Main Russ Gholti Hai

Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhuti Hai
Jese Titli Kisi Phool Pe Perr Tolti Hai

Bethnay Kion Nahi Deti Mujhe Pehluu Main
Meri Mehboob, Mujhe Khaak Main Kion Rolti Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

AQ September 12, 2007, 5:30am 2

Re: Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhuti Hai..

hmmm… AHmer… din badin khul rahai ho

baRay chupaY rustam ho

itni achi shaairi karnaY laggaY ho

iss maiN zara dau teen sher aur daalo

redidentity September 12, 2007, 5:35am 3

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Thnx Anwaar Jee..

AQ September 12, 2007, 5:40am 4

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haaN, aur meraY saath poori GS kee awaam ko bhee bataa diyaa

redidentity September 12, 2007, 5:45am 5

Re: Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhuti Hai..

dekhain del ker dia :)

AQ September 12, 2007, 5:48am 6

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LOL

now that move was so innocent … hahahaha…

you are an asset here buddy

What is the colour of ur eyes

redidentity September 12, 2007, 5:58am 7

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Sach.. Thnx

Shab-e-Hijar September 12, 2007, 6:17am 8

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last shair ko kya kardiya sari romantic poem ka bera garak kardiya

redidentity September 12, 2007, 6:20am 9

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lolx.. kia karon.. aise he nuzuul hua tha iss ka

SJ September 12, 2007, 7:30am 10

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wah Ahmer...............
quite romantic poem............
weldone man.............
u r poem is simply awesome..................
bohat pyaree hai........tumharee tarhan:)

redidentity September 12, 2007, 7:33am 11

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aww.. thnx..

wese main pyara nahi hoon.. em quite drawna

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SJ September 12, 2007, 7:44am 12

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Allah ki banaeee hoe har cheiz pyaree hai dear:)

wht made u smile today?

redidentity September 12, 2007, 7:45am 13

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Jee acha..

actually aap khud buhat piaray insaan ho na jabhi..

SJ September 12, 2007, 7:46am 14

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wel…

Prince_Ali September 12, 2007, 9:39am 15

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wow Ahmer! keep it up bro :k:

redidentity September 12, 2007, 10:01am 16

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Thnx Prince Ali

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tum_bin_1 September 12, 2007, 12:17pm 17

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*Bohat Ache poem hai *
*Zabardast *
*Love this one *

Bethnay Kion Nahi Deti Mujhe Pehluu Main
Meri Mehboob, Mujhe Khaak Pe Kion Rolti Hai

redidentity September 12, 2007, 12:32pm 18

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Thnx tum_bin :)

tum_bin_1 September 12, 2007, 12:48pm 19

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Pleasure is all mine :)

redidentity September 12, 2007, 12:55pm 20

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iska bhi thnx :D