ishq ka so'daee

SJ · September 15, 2007, 9:03am

ek taree hasee k badlay mein sab chotoon ko sah jata hai
ishq ka so’daee tu hamesha ghatay mein rah jata hai

gham ki bhatte mein jal jal kar sab mera saraapa khaak hoa
Maree halat dekh kay mujh ko har koi pagal kah jata hai

izzat,dolaat,shohrat aur yenaam ,wafa sab faani hain
behtay waqt k relay mein ye sab kcuh he bah jataa hai

hastay bastay shaks ko jab dukh ki demmak lag jaiy
wo kitna he mazbot na kyun ho akhir ik din dah jata hai

redidentity · September 15, 2007, 9:07am

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Beautiful piece.. magar mujhe lag raha hai k first misray main jal jal ker hona chaheay tha..

over all buhat acha.. buhat alag

Awesome

SJ · September 15, 2007, 9:12am

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ahan chalo aisaa kar laytay hain:)

redidentity · September 15, 2007, 9:14am

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yar.. i have shared a joke.. magar.. wahan 9 vies hain.. no reply but rated 5 stars :(

mystry hai solve ker do :(

SJ · September 15, 2007, 12:30pm

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iss mein prayshani ki kya baat hai..............
acha hain na paanch sitaray bethay bithay mil gay hain:)

Shab-e-Hijar · September 15, 2007, 12:46pm

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OMG
sonia g its superb :k:

keeep it up girl

SJ · September 15, 2007, 12:48pm

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\

such kah rahee ho kya???

Prince_Ali · September 15, 2007, 1:03pm

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wow! great one sonia! kuch chote errors hein urdu likhne mein, but overall thumbs up! :k: :k: :k:

i love the theme behind it, quite creative

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 15, 2007, 1:06pm

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boht achee lekheee

ho ge

:(

SJ · September 15, 2007, 1:07pm

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han prince jaldi mein likhe thee na…errors hon gay…
thanks:blush:

Shab-e-Hijar · September 15, 2007, 1:07pm

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haan na roza rakh kar jhoot kyu bolo gi

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 15, 2007, 1:08pm

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ap ke age ketne he

jhot nehe bolnah roza he apkah:p

Prince_Ali · September 15, 2007, 1:11pm

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koi baat nahi, bas zara dheeray chalo

Shab-e-Hijar · September 15, 2007, 1:12pm

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ye to mai bolo gi hi nahi

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 15, 2007, 1:14pm

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me kese ko nehe baton ge :halo:

SJ · September 15, 2007, 1:16pm

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awww…mein nay kab aisaa kaha…

SJ · September 15, 2007, 1:20pm

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prince aj kal bohat busy hon…teez teez na chalon ge tu mushkil ho jaiy ge na:)

Prince_Ali · September 15, 2007, 1:31pm

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array agar zindagi mein se mushkilen khatam ho jayen to jeenay ka kya maza

tum_bin_1 · September 15, 2007, 1:40pm

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kyun aap ko sakoon say jeena acha nahi lagta kya ?

SJ · September 15, 2007, 2:47pm

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tumahin bila wajah udasee ka attak kyun ho jata hai:faizy: