is she'r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

KKF February 13, 2011, 10:39pm 1

**salaam dosto,

mere maHboob shaa’ir janaab e AsGhar GonDvii ne ek azeem shaa’ir kii Ghazal kii tazmeen farmaayii thii. maiN donoN GhazloN ka matl’a darj kartaa huN aur aapko yeh bataanaa hai k pahlaa she’r kis zabaan kaa hai…Faarsii yaa Urdu?

ek ustaad shaa’ir kaa she’r:

hazaar jaama_darii, sad_hazaar baKhiya_garii
tamaam shorish o tamkiiN nisaar-e-be_Khabarii

AsGhar GonDvii kaa she’r:

sukoon-e-shorish-e-pinhaaN hai shoGhl-e-jaama_darii
qaraar-e-seena-e-sozaaN hai naala-e-saHarii**

deadsoul February 13, 2011, 10:57pm 2

Re: is she'r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

pashtu lagta hai

Shab-e-Hijar February 13, 2011, 10:59pm 3

Re: is she’r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

bigra huwa version of farsi and urdu
zaroor ap nay bigara hoga

bheegiyaad February 13, 2011, 11:00pm 4

Re: is she’r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

Shab-e-Hijar February 13, 2011, 11:01pm 5

Re: is she’r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

Khalil and dead bring to tasreef ka tokra to my Valentine Thread

Shab-e-Hijar February 13, 2011, 11:02pm 6

Re: is she’r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

mera thread nai dekh raha tumhay

bheegiyaad February 13, 2011, 11:08pm 7

Re: is she’r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

kiya to hai reply

UZ February 13, 2011, 11:19pm 8

Re: is she'r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

pehla sher farsi kaa hai and doosra wala urdu kaa :)

KKF February 13, 2011, 11:32pm 9

Re: is she’r ko aap Faarsii kaa kaheNge yaa urdu kaa?

pashto “lagtaa” hai yaa “lagtii” hai?

lol…hahaha…maiN to Khud hii is qadar “bigRaa” huaa huN k kisii ko kia bigaaRuuNgaa hehe

maiN to ho bhii aayaa…apni “lan taraanii” chaspaan bhii kar dii