Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

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My dear fellow Poetry fourm members:

Today I am reaching out to you for a good cause in my opinion. Gupshup Poetry forum is a place in the whole world wide web, where we take pride in being the most unique, dynamic, creative, purely poetry oriented, and more interactive and interconnected with each other than any of other Urdu Poetry Forums on the net (even though Urdu poetry is not the only poetry one can post here)…

Recently during last one year or so, we have had many competitions ranging from Bait Baazi, Bait Baazi between the teams, Azadi Competition, so on and so forth; and those were made successful because of the outstanding dedication and participation from none other but all of you.

We spend our time everyday here in fun threads like Time Pass or bait baazi or even reading some good stuff being posted and commenting on that by our appreciation. The idea that I have come with today is something that might be a hard work for you people because it may require some research and given the short period of time, it does seem very difficult. But, I believe in you and I am taking a shot. If I will fail, I will take the responsibility and will desert the idea but if it becomes successful, then, it will be only people like you who can make it a success.

April 21st is the date that marks the death anniversary of Our national hero Allama Iqbal. I feel it my duty to ask everyone of you to take some time out and be enthusiastic about the competition in this regard. By participating, you can register your regard to this great person who is known as Thinker of Pakistan. If we can spend time posting in Time Pass, I am sure, it will worth to take few hours from your time, to actually participate in it.

I will make it very simple.

What we are looking for as the entry is following:

  • Introduction (2 points)
  • Presentation (3 points)
  • Piece of poetry (could be more than one) related to presentation (5 points -given that it is related to presentation)

What you need to do is to pick up a poetry style of Iqbal and describe that in your own words. Yes, we are actually not looking for copy paste but you can get help from already available material…

You can choose to present Iqbal that has written for children. You describe his poetry in that regard that what type of poetry he did etc. and then, choose a poem or two or more to support your description.

Likewise, you can choose Iqbal who is more nationalistic in his poetry or you can choose Iqbal who is more religious, or phiolospher or a thinker. But remember to support it with his poetry because that’s what the competition is about…

Additional Rules are:

  • NO Audio/Video is allowed
  • Images can be used
  • No entry should exceed more than 1 post.

Simple and easy…

To make it more easy for you, I have only three links and I am sure it will be good enough for you guys to come up with a plan…

A detailed overview of his life from where you can get help in your introduction (remember it is only 2 points so it should not be too long):
http://pakistantimes.net/2004/11/11/specialreport.htm

His books online:
http://iqbalcyberlibrary.net/index-2.html

and finally, this thread where you will find “all types” of Iqbal… This will be a good source for the poetry part of your entry:
http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=268346

Both I and Shab have tried to contact Gizzy to approve the idea of getting custom title for the winners but have not heard anything from him; he seems to be busy… but if we hear anything from him, we will let you know…

What I am asking in this thread is to come and suggest anything. Please, let us know who is participating so we can start the actual thread once we have enough participants… If we do not get enough people, we will unfortunately have to drop the idea and that will be a sad thing for me to bear because I believe in each one of you and I know how good you are in participation. So I am looking forward for it…

One last thing is that there are three judges appointed for this competition and almost all three of them are not regular poster of Intikhab, however, all three of them are themselves good poets and have an eye of judgement - This is done to reduce any biases or impartiality, if there could be any… and also, it will allow moderators to participate in the competition as well… So we have two participants already…

It does not have to be on April 21st - we can be flexible and can stretch it to the end of month if members think that will be fair.

Your turn; I am all ears. :slight_smile:

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lab pe aatii hai duaa banake tamannaa merii
zindagii shammaa kii surat ho Khudaayaa merii

duur duniyaa kaa mere dam a.Ndheraa no jaaye
har jagah mere chamakane se ujaalaa ho jaaye

ho mere dam se yuu.N hii mere watan kii ziinat
jis tarah phuul se hotii hai chaman kii ziinat

zindagii ho merii parawaane kii surat yaa rab
ilm kii shammaa se ho mujhako mohabbat yaa rab

ho meraa kaam Gariibo.n kii himaayat karanaa
dard-ma.ndo.n se zaiifo.n se mohabbat karanaa

mere Allaah buraaii se bachaanaa mujhako
nek jo raah ho us raah pe chalaanaa mujhako
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Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

Koyal jee :smack: Thread tau read kar leteeN :frowning:

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:hehe:

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

AQ Koyal Ka Kaam KO KO Karna Hai Aap nay kaha Iqbal…unhoun nay likh dala:)

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

mai aur hus lou? :blush:

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Hmmmm it will be difficult but will certainly try to spare time for the good cause of paying tribute to our National Hero our ways..................The competition should be extended upto 30th April:)

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^
I am up for extending .... and thanks muddii for taking up the challenge. I knew I can always count on you :)

and not only you, I am counting on many others too.... !

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

Hussnay kay liay Ejazat Key koi Zaroorat nahee app khul kay hasooo:)

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

mujhey Urdu meiN bataaeiN yahaan kya honey wala hey, mujhey english koi nahi aati :(

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Hum yahaaN yeh dekh rahai haiN kaY kaun kaun hamaaraY Qoumi Hero ko khiraaj-e-Tehseen pesh karnaY kaY liye taiiyaar hai :slight_smile:

Competition kee mukhtasir tafseel yeh hai:

Iqbal kee shaairi mukhtalif adwaar maiN mukhtalif andaaz kee rahi hai… jaisaY 1905 say pehlaY Iqbal maiN wataniyat or qoumiyat kaa jazbaa ziadah thaa aur baa’d maiN deeni jazbaat nay Iqbal ko apni grift maiN laY liye.. issi tarah iqbal bahesiyat muffakkir, falsafi aur bachoN kaY shaair saY bhee jaanaY jaataY haiN…

Participants ko karnaa sirf yeh hai kaY Iqbal kee shaairi kaY kissi aik aspect/pehlu par likhnaa hai aur ussi aspect kaY mutaabiq shaairi kaa chunaao bhee karnaa hai..

Rules yeh haiN:

  • Introduction/Tamheed (2 points)

  • Presentation (3 points)

  • Shaairi (Aik say ziadah, nazm, ghazal waghera ho sakti haiN) laikin ba mutaabiq presentation (5 points )

  • Audio/Video Mamnoo’

  • Images istemaal kiye jaa saktaY haiN

  • Competition post sirf AIK entry maiN hogi naa kaY multiple.

Mundarza zel teen links meraY nazdeek bahut ehm aur kaar aamad haiN

Zindagi kaa Khaakaa for Introduction/Tamheed (2 point haiN, lehaazaa ikhtesaar magar Jaami’at zaroori hai):
http://pakistantimes.net/2004/11/11/specialreport.htm

Online kitaabaiN:
http://iqbalcyberlibrary.net/index-2.html

aur, yeh dhaga jiss maiN “har mozu kaa Iqbal” aaraam saY mil jaaye gaa:
http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=268346

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AQ bahee Salaam

This is a fantastic idea to remember & pay our tribute to allama.

Apnay mohsin ko khiraj e aqeedat aur khiraj e tehseen paish karnay ka yeah kamtareen hi sahee lekin aik tareeqa to hai.

i hope this will go ahead and people will participate in it.

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Mirza Saahab: aap ko bhee karnaa hogaa participate, aisaY kaam naheeN challaY gaa :)

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Parhi likhi hoti agar tu koyal yeh kam kerti:D

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Agree, Itni Jaldi meiN hissa nahi Le sakti, Date Change Ho sakti hey tou Theek hey ...Warna Meri Reply sey mehroom reh jaaeiN ge:-p

AQ baateiN kam kiya kareiN humaari Reply pe ghoR kareiN:D

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Considering that it will go as far as end of month... I can see so far 5 participants ready for the task... That is GREAT ...... In less than 12 hours we have 5 people ready to do that... We will keep our fingers crossed .... Insha Allah we will have enough... (I am rooting for more than 10 atleast)

So confirmed participants SO FAR are:

  1. Shab-e-Hijar
  2. Nikamijano
  3. muddii
  4. Mirza Ruswa *]Gul-e-Tasbeeh

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

wowww
buhat zabardst idea hai
but AQ kia presntation k lye 3 points buhat zyada nahi hain?

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

hmm try keroon gy insha Allah :) .wese 30th april tak time mil jay tooo....

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Bhai Mera Naam To Har Haal Mein Hona Chahiye Tha Mein Shab Ko Confirm Kar Chuka Hon !

Re: Iqbal Death Anniversary Day Competition - Suggestions/Feed Back

Halwa Bana Ke De Dia Hai AQ bhai Aap Ne To Phir Bhi Participants Kam Hain Ye Almia Hai Is Forum Ka !