ikk samandar tha sahil se door
ikk kashti dagmag chalti thi
biphri si in mojon se
kuch khasta qisse kehti thi
sehmi si ikk larrki thi us men
jo khoi khoi rehti thi
na jane bhaid muhabbat ka
phir b iss aag men jalti thi
ikk dil tha pagal pagal sa
jo dharrka tha anjane men
phir iss dil ki tano ko
lehron pe ginti rehti thi
be naam se jazbe or adhuri tehrirain
wo in ko bhench k rakhti thi
phir ik lehar ne sab mitta dia
wo jis ko seench k rakhti thi
suna hai!
ab b wo kashti dagmag chalti hai
per na hai ab wo sehmi si larrki
jo khoi khoi rehti thi…
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Amazing 
a very deep poem …apun ka psand aai 
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Nice one
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:k: Nice. Boht Umda.
Title padh ke laga ke ailaan e gumshudgi hai. padh ke ‘Mohabbaten’ movie yaad agai.
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thanx for likin guys :)
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chalen poori parrh k tu tasali ho gai na…mashallah bohat acha hafiza hai per kesi baat hai,mujhe ap ka naam parrh k haqeem gulqand dehalwi ki muqawwe adwiaat yad a gain 
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Shazia very nice :k:
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chalen poori parrh k tu tasali ho gai na...mashallah bohat acha hafiza hai per kesi baat hai,mujhe ap ka naam parrh k haqeem gulqand dehalwi ki muqawwe adwiaat yad a gain :@:
hahah. Aapa Muqawwee bole to Muhammad Qawwee. Yeh hakeem gulqand kon tha?
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Achi nazm tehreer ki hey aap ney…:k: … daad qabool kijeeye 
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thanx UZ n Amal.
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mashallah,my favourite name Muhammad…haqeem gulkand mere taya k bete k pupha k chacha k bhatijae k hamsaye k dukanandaar ka naam hai…ab ye na keh dena itna qareebi rishta??? :hinna:
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Apiya, maan gaya aap ki kunba parwari ko. itne door ke rishte aur un ke padosi bhi yaad hain.
waise nice poem when I visualise that masoom akeli larki, mujhe to rona agaya. 
Mere zehn main ‘IK ladki thi deevani si’ ki file ab aap ki iss poem se replace hogai hai.
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chalo shukar :hinna:
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اچھی نظم ہے، داد قبول کیجے
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from me too....:)
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thanx paen 
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awww urdu 
thanx Saad g :hinna:
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wah..behtareen nazm hai Shazia aapa :k:
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thanx apa ki jan
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wow nice