i just love it

ashi2007 · April 25, 2007, 6:23pm

jaan ker bhi woh mujey jaan na paye
aaj tak woh mujey pehchaan na paye
khud he ker li humne bewafie
tanke un pe koi ilzaam na aye
nakaam si kosish kiya karte hain
hum hain ke un se pyar kiya kerte hain
khuda ne taqdeer main ek tuta tara nahi likha
aur hum hain ke chaand ki arzoo kiya kerte hain
milna itefaaq tha aur bicharna naseeb tha
woh utna he door hogaya jitna kareeb tha
hum usko dekhne ke liye taraste he rahe
jis shaks ki hateli pe hamara naseeb tha
meri dil ki kitaab ko parna kabhi
mere sapnoon main a ke milna kabhi
maine duniya chotri hai tere liye
meri nazroon ki umeed banna kabhi
bohat door hai sitaroon se roshan jahan
zara humkadum bun ke saath chalna kabhi
bohat nazuk hai seene main dil mera
tum dil main mohabbat bun ke dharakna kabhi

m.a.d.i.h.a · April 25, 2007, 7:09pm

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nice one!

deadsoul · April 25, 2007, 9:17pm

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nice

Bismah · April 25, 2007, 11:26pm

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it is a great nazm. who is it by?

tahreem_saeed · April 26, 2007, 3:24am

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milna itefaaq tha aur bicharna naseeb tha
woh utna he door hogaya jitna kareeb tha

nice sharing

deep_ocean · April 26, 2007, 7:02am

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very nice

decent_Felow · April 26, 2007, 7:06am

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MashaAllah so sweeeeet

ashi2007 · April 26, 2007, 7:47am

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i really dont know:confused:

Nikka_Kaka · April 26, 2007, 9:39am

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Ashi koun hia wo ???? :)

ashi2007 · April 26, 2007, 10:23am

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i was talking abt the poem

aminas · April 26, 2007, 10:25am

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very nice !

Nikka_Kaka · April 26, 2007, 11:11am

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ashi2007:

jaan ker bhi woh mujey jaan na paye aaj tak woh mujey pehchaan na paye khud he ker li humne bewafie tanke un pe koi ilzaam na aye nakaam si kosish kiya karte hain hum hain ke un se pyar kiya kerte hain khuda ne taqdeer main ek tuta tara nahi likha aur hum hain ke chaand ki arzoo kiya kerte hain milna itefaaq tha aur bicharna naseeb tha woh utna he door hogaya jitna kareeb tha hum usko dekhne ke liye taraste he rahe jis shaks ki hateli pe hamara naseeb tha meri dil ki kitaab ko parna kabhi mere sapnoon main a ke milna kabhi maine duniya chotri hai tere liye meri nazroon ki umeed banna kabhi bohat door hai sitaroon se roshan jahan zara humkadum bun ke saath chalna kabhi bohat nazuk hai seene main dil mera tum dil main mohabbat bun ke dharakna kabhi

Ashi koun hia wo :D

ashi2007 · April 27, 2007, 9:18am

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aap kis ki baat ker rahe hain

Nikka_Kaka · April 27, 2007, 10:22am

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mein jo app ne ghazal mein jiss ka zikar keya hia uss ki baat kar raha thaa ..... I was just kidding :)