hm kisi ki khayat hota hain

Hmain khabar nahi hoti
hm kisi ki khayat hota hain

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Welcome to GS Poetry, takmeel sher ki kuch khaas samajh nahi aai :-)

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Welcome to GS :bb:
Shair ki samaj to mujhe bhi nahi aayi. :slight_smile:

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Welcome to GS Takmeel :):flower1: Have a nice stay over here.

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ajai gee yeh bahna zara alag kisim ki hai kyn bahna am i right ok tc

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i think it's like this...!!!!!!!
Hamain khaber nahi hoti
Hum kisi ki Hayat hotay hain

Aur iis ka matlab yeh ho sakta hai k hum kisi k liay sab kuch hotay hain...OR.... hum kisi ki zindagi hain aur hamain iis ki khaber nahi hoti!

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Thanx Gul_e_Tasbeeh :Prince Ali :Amal:and Muslim girl 4 welcoming

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n han sunny bahya ap ka bilkul thanx nai bolon gi ku k YE AP KA AHLAQ-E-FARZ HA K BAHNA KO APPRICIATE KRO c u soon

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Welcome to GS
Aur shair ki samja mujhe bi nahi aayi :-)

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Aabla_pa sahib, aap ki kafi tehqeeq hi Ms. Takmeel kay ashaar main....zara mujh ko bhi is shair ka matlab samjha dain. pleaseeeeee

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Itnay seniors ko samaj nahi aa rahi to bhala mein kya cheez hoon. Research karni paray gi. jis k liye time chahiyey. waisay pehli baar dekhnay mein jo samaj aee hai wo ye hai:

HAMEIN KHUD BHI KHABAR NAHI HOTI
HUM KISI KI HAYAAT HOTAY HEIN

Sajid saab. aap correction kar deejiye ga agar koi mistake ho gaee ho. Takmeel sahiba ne to ye sher POST kar k wapis mur kar dekhnay ki zehmat hi gawara nahi ki :)

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main na kaha sb apni rae da lain tu kuch bolon thanx jnho na para n jin ko smj nai ae all of u ab is sher ka mtlb smjana ka lia ak or sher bhaj rai hoon doon tkreeban hm-mani hain

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na jana kon duaoon main yad krta ha
main dobta hoon samandar uchal data ha

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ya b smaj na ae to khya ga most welcome

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ye b samaj nahi aee ;)

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welcome shelcome bechi:)
very nice...thx 4 sharing

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Yeh sayr iis tarha hai:
~~Woh kon hai jo mujhe duain deta hai
Mein doobta hoon samander uuchaal daita hai
~~

Bas pehli line mein thori se galti ker di aap nae!:)

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waisay yeh mera fav shayr hai!
thx for sharing!

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thanx bari b n muslim girl
n han ya sher jasa likha ha wasa he ha i hav checked it again 4 original buk

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abla pa ji ap ik tutor rk loo urdu nasar ka lia ita simple sa sher smj nai aya too bad...........