Re: hm kisi ki khayat hota hain
Takmeel k hotay mein tutor rakhoon. Thats 2 bad. Wasiay takmeel sahiba mein tutor rakh loonga par aap b zara spellings k liye ek tutor rakh lein. Agar tutor nahi milta to mein hazir hoon.
And about the other sher:
najaanay kon duaoon mein yaad karta hai
mein doobta hoon samandar uchaal deta hai
Its absolutely correct. I wonder k Muslim Girl ne ye sher kahan se parha hai.