Hansi khanakti hui

Niksik · August 18, 2009, 10:40pm

Hansi khanakti hui
aur bujhi bujhi khushiyan
hai dosti ki mehek sey
hai rachi hui ghariyan
maza anokha sa hai
aatey jaatey lamhon mein
kitabey godh mey pheli
hai khoye baaton mein
rafaqaton mey khazana
jo hum ney paaya hai
na dil pey bojh hey koi
na gham ka saaya hai…

system · August 19, 2009, 5:09am

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

nice sharing

Koyal · August 20, 2009, 12:25pm

Beautiful sharing niksik ap ko shaieri ka b shoaq hai :)

Shab-e-Hijar · August 20, 2009, 5:58pm

very nice nikki :k:

Niksik · August 20, 2009, 6:14pm

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

To tell you the truth, I’m not much of a poet and I ain’t that great at understanding urdu either. I get the concept, then I work with the words…thanks to miyaN jee

terray_naam · August 20, 2009, 6:47pm

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

very nice jee

_MuNiYa · August 20, 2009, 7:08pm

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

lovely!

Saqi_the_angel · August 20, 2009, 10:55pm

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

nice one

being_lonely · August 21, 2009, 3:52am

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

Beautiful sharing niksik :k:

Niksik · August 21, 2009, 5:15am

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

Thanks for the encouragement.

nayab87 · August 21, 2009, 11:09am

Re: Hansi khanakti hui

nice sharing.....