Hans kar yeh Chandni ki Ridaa mujh pe daal do (Baqalam kHud)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Assalamo alaikum Dosto
Aik adad Ghazal arz kartaa hooN..

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Utro mere khayaal meiN RaateN ujaal do
Hans kar yeh Chandni ki Ridaa mujh pe Daal do

Arsa huwa hai Lams ka mar’ham nahiN mila
ZakHmoN ko cHoo ke inko zara Indimaal do

Ik Tishnagi hai kab se meri Rooh meiN cHuppi
Ik BooNd Behr-e-Lutf-o-Karam se ucHaal do

Bikhra hooN tere Naqsh-e-Kaf-e-Paa pe ja-ba-ja
Mujhko samet lo, kahiN mujhko sanbhaal do

Karke Shanaasaa Dil ko mere apne gHam ke saath
Fikr-e-gHam-e-Hayaat se mujhko Nikaal do

Muddat hui hai Gardish-e-Aalam kaa hooN Shikaar
“Shakir” ab AA ke Gardish-e-Aalam ko Taal do !!!
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aap ki Raaaye ka Minutazir

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KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

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very nice

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app asi tarha arz karte rahen aur hum apni raye dete rahen ge

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Arsa huwa hai Lams ka mar’ham nahiN mila
ZakHmoN ko cHoo ke inko zara Indimaal do

bohat hi achi koshish hai…qafiya bhi aur wazan bhi

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keep it up !!

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Nice

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Registered & Officially
— Pangay Baaz —

Rude Boyz Rulez

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good 1

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hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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Ab main kia kaho..main to tareef kar kar keh tak ghay ho …mere pass to ilfaas hi nahin rehe

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aap se kiss ne kahaa Tareef akrne ko ..aap bass Mehzooz hoN aur Tareef ko mariye Goli Aspirin ki

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Thanx

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

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He he haan yeh bhi sehi hai …is barain main socha nahin…chalhe dost isliye to kaam athe hai ..thanks jee

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Dost milte haiN yahaaN dil ko dukhaane ke liye
uNgaliyaaN rakhte haiN wo ham pe uThaane ke liye

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KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

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very nice

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keep it up :slight_smile:

MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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Shukriaa Chand_Chehraa
aik baat bataaoUn aapko
aap meri ustaad haiN kioUnkeh aap se maiN ne kucH sekha hai ..bcs aap jo Gifs Post karti haiN na Java ke ..main hameshaa se unko post karne ki try kiya karta tha magar nahin hotaa thaa
do tee postings jab aap ki dekhein aur quote karne lagaa tha wahan mujhey wo commands nazar aagain jiss se maiN ne seekhaa
iss ylie Ustaani-e-Mohtarma sar-e-tasslem kHam hai aap ke huzoorr aur shukriaa meri Ghazal ki pazeerai ka
Jazzaak Allah

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Tassneef:

Dost milte haiN yahaaN dil ko dukhaane ke liye
uNgaliyaaN rakhte haiN wo ham pe uThaane ke liye

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jese hath ki ungliyah aik jeshi nahin hoti...weshi hi haar inshaan ek jesha nahin hota

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[quote]
Originally posted by Nayab:
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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Tassneef:

Dost milte haiN yahaaN dil ko dukhaane ke liye
uNgaliyaaN rakhte haiN wo ham pe uThaane ke liye

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jese hath ki ungliyah aik jeshi nahin hoti...weshi hi haar inshaan ek jesha nahin hota**
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Aamad-e-Dost ki Naveed Kou-e-Wafa meiN garam thi
MaiN ne bhi ik CharaagH sa Dil Sar-e-Shaam rakh diyaa
(Ahmad Faraaz)**

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited June 24, 2002).]

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bahut khoob!

i would say a very good effort! keep it up

"Arsa huwa hai Lams ka mar'ham nahiN mila
ZakHmoN ko cHoo ke inko zara Indimaal do"

kafi acha khayaal hay

woh kaha hay na faraz nay!

aik umer say hoon lazzatay girya say bhee mehroom

aye rahat-ay jaan mujh ko rulanay k liay aa!

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[quote]
Originally posted by show_sha:
**bahut khoob!

i would say a very good effort! keep it up

"Arsa huwa hai Lams ka mar'ham nahiN mila
ZakHmoN ko cHoo ke inko zara Indimaal do"

kafi acha khayaal hay

woh kaha hay na faraz nay!

aik umer say hoon lazzatay girya say bhee mehroom

aye rahat-ay jaan mujh ko rulanay k liay aa!

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Shukriaa Show_sha sahib...! jazak allah

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

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buhat ache hazoor

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qibla aur bhi sunaaiye gaa.

aapke kalaam mein latafat bhi hai aur nazakat bhi…
alfaaz ka chunaao seedhaa dil mein utar geyaa.

be_had mashkoor

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Gham-e-zindagii ,gham-e-bandagii,gham-e-dojahaan ,gham-e-javadaan
Meri haar nazaar teri muntaziir, teri haar nazaar mera imtehaaN.........

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Masha’Allah bery Beautiful Gedicht keep it up

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[quote]
Originally posted by Nayab:
Gham-e-zindagii ,gham-e-bandagii,gham-e-dojahaan ,gham-e-javadaan
Meri haar nazaar teri muntaziir, teri haar nazaar mera imtehaaN.........
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Kissi ka Dard il piyaar se,tumhara Naaz keya samjhe
Jo Guzre Said ki Jee per Shehbaaz keya samjhe

Rehaa karna haiN Sayaad ab Pamaal akrna hai
Pharhakknaa bhi jisse bhoola ho so parwaaz keya samjhe

Na poocHo mujhs e mera Haal , Tuk Duniya meiN jeene do
kHudaa jaane maiN keya bolooN ,koi gHammaaz keya samjhe**

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

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Do chaar lafz keh kar main khamosh ho ghay..
Woh muskurah keh bolhe bohot bolti ho tum...