Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

Shab e gham mujhse mil kar aise ro’yi
mila ho jaise sadiyon baad koi

Hamen apni samajh aati nahin khud
Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

qareeb manzil pe aake dum hai toota
kahan aakar meri taqdeer soi

Kuch aise aaj unki yaad aai
mili ho jaise dault ek khoi

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

wht a comparison :hmmm:

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

lols maine bhi kisi zamane main issi theme per ek nazm likhi thi.. jo mere doston ko kafi pasand aai thi… ab bhool gaya hoon.. kahin likhi bhi nahin thin

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

:( aisi cheezain likh leyni chahiye

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

:hmmm: Unki…?

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

ismey itna soochna kya ?

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

LP ny sahi kaha.........

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

Aaj/Kal Bro ko Kuch ziyada hi yaad aa rahi hyn.......WO

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

dobara likh loon ga.. koi masla nahin.. waise iss ghazal ka aakhri shair bhi issi khayal per mabni hai:

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Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

Bohat Umdah…bro

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

meri her roz baat hoti hai uss se

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

wow…:k:

Kia baat hy Janab ki…:flowers:

Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

Kuch aise aaj unki yaad aai
mili ho jaise dault ek khoi

:hmmm:

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

Teri yaad

chalen ji.. doobara likh li

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

:snooty:

Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

^ nahi bas soch thee ke aaj itniiiii sari ‘yaad’ wali Shairy kyu share kar rahey hain :hmmm:

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

kisi ko yaad karne per pabandi hai.. aap Rehman Malik kee paRos main to nahin rehtin?

Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

Pabandi nahi, Mai to chahti hoo khul ke yad Karen aur Hume bhi bataye ke Kis ko yad kar rahey they :p

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

acha ji

Re: Hamen kia khaak samjhae ga koi

:k: