hamaray paas tha aankhon meiN paani aur kya detay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal April 25, 2008, 11:45am 1

tumhain bakhsi hay dil ki hukm’rani aur kya detay
yehi thi bus hamari raj’dhani aur kya detay

saja ker sir hatheli per gaye thay koo-e-jana me
hum apnay ishq main unko nishani aur kya detay

wo hamsay mangta tha umar ka ik dil-nasheen hissa
na detay usko hum apni jawani aur kya detay

sitaaron se kisi ki maang bherna ik fasana hai
tumharay naam likh di zind’gani aur kya detay

bichartay waqt usko ik na ik tuhfa to dena tha
***hamaray paas tha aankhon meiN paani aur kya detay ***

bheegiyaad April 25, 2008, 12:20pm 2

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bichartay waqt usko ik na ik tuhfa to dena tha
**hamaray paas tha aankhon meiN paani aur kya detay **

**wah ku ku **

mama_ki_dua April 25, 2008, 12:42pm 3

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very nice :)

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Sheal April 25, 2008, 1:30pm 4

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very nice sharing like always :k:

deadsoul April 25, 2008, 3:26pm 5

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v nice

being_lonely April 25, 2008, 4:59pm 6

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kitni baar share karo gi ye birdy

abeeha April 25, 2008, 5:24pm 7

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bichartay waqt usko ik na ik tuhfa to dena tha
***hamaray paas tha aankhon meiN paani aur kya detay

this sher is just awesome.
and the whole poem is wonderful ,fabolous and outstanding,really its very touching.

abeeha April 25, 2008, 5:31pm 8

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the whole gazal is fabolous,outstanding n very beautifully written.

bichartay waqt usko ik na ik tuhfa to dena tha
***hamaray paas tha aankhon meiN paani aur kya detay

***and this sher is just awesome.

~~~Missing Someone~~~

Shab-e-Hijar April 25, 2008, 8:32pm 9

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jaan baqi rah gaye woh bhi daydaitay :D

Missing him terribly..

innocent_doll22 April 26, 2008, 12:18pm 10

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nice choice................................................

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

Shumaisa April 26, 2008, 12:24pm 11

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wah bohat khoob Koyal…

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

Jhanjharewali April 26, 2008, 2:22pm 12

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oh koko…Jw ko bahot pasand aai. shukriya

Koyal April 27, 2008, 3:26am 13

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agay kab ji hia ye

Koyal April 27, 2008, 3:27am 14

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thanks JWali pata tha ap ko aa’ey ghi pasand

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Koyal April 27, 2008, 3:27am 15

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Q? wo ap k leay rakhi thei

S.786 April 27, 2008, 8:57am 16

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nice.........one

Koyal April 28, 2008, 3:07am 17

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thanks Safia g :)

Dushwari April 28, 2008, 3:42am 18

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koyal, is it by you?
best,
Dushwari

ullujii April 30, 2008, 4:37am 19

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saja ker sir hatheli per gaye thay koo-e-jana me
hum apnay ishq main unko nishani aur kya detay really nice and superb :)