Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

*Ghar mai chamchay to bohat hain, par DOYI koyi naheen
college mai hai to hazaro par US jaisi koyi naheen
HAANDI meray pyar ki kab say hai choolay pay
JALNAY ko ye tyar hai, par neechay US ki AAG naheen

-written by the one and only and is saddi kay azeem o naaz shaiR - ASN
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Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

LOL
shaabaash. :D

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

Azeem O shan tu suna tah , whtz this Azeem O naz yoke nicker?

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

dekho bhai, iss maiN kuch wazan kaa fuqdaan lagtaa hai... issi khiyaal ko aisaY pesh karo tau baRi behtreen aur mufeed cheez neez azeem-ush-shaan bhee bun jaaye gee.. umeed hai passand aaye gee

Ghar maiN chamchay bohat hain, par DOYI naheeN hai
college maiN hazaaroN haiN, uss jaisee naheeN hai
HAANDI meraY piyaar kee, ik muddat say chaRhi hai
ChoolhaY maiN neechaY, par aag hee naheeN hai

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

LOL..................

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

Anwar bhai, haandi meri choola mera, tay tussi mere sher nu edar udar na karo. Maine aap kay kalaam mai a kar kabhi sher ko idhar udhar kia hai :(

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wah! really touching :teary2: :frowning:

mein aapki poetry ka bohut bara fan hoon ASN bhai!

aapne meri poem abhi tak nahi parhi cafe mein (aapke thread mein) :frowning:

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

Prince aaj reply karoonga usko.

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meharbani dost! :yahoo:

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yaar… dekho uss kaa wazan theek kiyaa hai… kitni zabar10 cheez bun gayee hai :hugz:

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its true…app nay shair main jaan daal de hai…buhat zabardast…

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

paai aapas ki baat hai, US ki aag thori garam hoti hai, iraaqyon say poocho.
iss liye shukar karo abhi tak bachay hovay ho

Re: Haandi Mere Pyaar Ki

Anwar bhai ASN ki handi na kharab karo abhi to aag bhi nahin jalai unhon ne

yes aag jalanay ke liye lakrion ki zaroorat parray gi wo us ke bhai band le aain ge akathi kar lijye ga

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:)