GS Photography Classes With Dubaiwali

Hmmna · August 12, 2012, 7:31pm

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Lippy
i like the blue of the swimming pool and the sky ( i think a bit too much sky)
i think its from quite a far. maybe a bit zoomed in

LKK
there is a lot of empty background
i love the jellyfish??
very cute colours

annie_bibi · August 12, 2012, 7:55pm

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Flickr: annie bibi’s Photostream
i don’t have an awesome camera yet,planning to buy one.This one is from my phone though:)

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:01pm

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Hmmna:

What stands out most in their photograph?
the colour of the book

Explain the reason to question number 1
its prominent n looking good with the skin background
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
i think there should be equal spacing at right n left side of the book, it is bit more on the right side
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
i like the way book is placed on the table, opened and facing upwards, dislike nothing
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
a student’s view ( i m not good at giving caption)
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
just make book in the center

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:03pm

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H&NK:

What stands out most in their photograph?
the slight angle of the pic

Explain the reason to question number 1
its looking nice
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
candles can be more prominent
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
dislike nothing but the light of candle is captured very nicely
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
romance with candles :bummer:
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
can add bit more of the candles

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:03pm

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Lippy:

What stands out most in their photograph?
sky

Explain the reason to question number 1
because it is occupying maximum space in the pic
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
sky is occuping maximum space of the pic
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
i really like the colours dislike nothing
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
summer funs
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
it can be more zoomed in i guess

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:03pm

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LKK:

What stands out most in their photograph?
the light in the middle

Explain the reason to question number 1
because evrything else is dark
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
i cant make out wht is he trying to show :konfused:
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
i wish pic was bit more clear :bummer:
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
welcome to the dark world
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
make it bit more clear

Hmmna · August 12, 2012, 8:05pm

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annie bibi’s
i like your curtains! and the image of the lamp in the mirror
i dnt knw wat to concentrate on in the picture although the weather outside looks very cool and inviting

STA · August 12, 2012, 8:05pm

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The Random Thread

Here’s all of the photos in one post, so you guys don’t have to go back and forth the thread.

DA:

“baby’s shoes”

The way you put both shoes is looking attractive, wooded background is making it more great. I think you took this picture from the top. Next time, when you select your object, you can take shot with different view. I believe, that will help to understand dynamics of different angles.

Hmmna:

“partial/random reading”

You could remove the bottle of perfume and item next to it. It looks like someone left book on the table and flip it back, that is making it interesting, so next time read it continuously.

H&NK:

“colorful candles”

It is looking stunning, no wonder bunch of candle lights with colorful wax are always attractive. I can also noticed that you moved your camera little bit in upward direction from the right hand side.

Lippy:

“swimming pool”

Clouds, water pool and grass are attractive in your picture. Your picture is not too clear to me, but if you only go with water water pool then it would be more interesting. Overall, it is nice to see beautiful landscape.

LKK:

“flame”

:rotfl: it looks flame to me. What should I say about it? :hmmm:

my comments in blue. :@:

Dubaiwali · August 12, 2012, 8:07pm

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That is fine if you don’t have a camera yet! welcome aboard. All we need is members who are serious about this initiative. We don’t discriminate against what cameras you have or don’t. I love the reflection of the lamp on the window!

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:09pm

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Sidra:

What stands out most in their photograph?
the plates
Explain the reason to question number 1
i think because they are the focus
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
love the colours
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
i really like the curtains not covering the window n dim light coming dislike nothing
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
homes are us :cb:
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
i think it can bit more bright i guess

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:10pm

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STA:

What stands out most in their photograph?
the water drops on lemon
Explain the reason to question number 1
its just very appealing
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
it is nicely captured
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
i like tha angel, n the cool feeling the pic is giving
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
cool
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
it cna be slighty zoomed out

Dubaiwali · August 12, 2012, 8:10pm

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STA instead of commenting on the photos, could you critique them like Hmmna and DA have done? Doesn't necessarily have to be paragraphs.

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:13pm

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What stands out most in their photograph?
lamp
Explain the reason to question number 1
because of its light
As you keep looking at the photograph, what do you think?
nice view frm the window
What aspect of the photo you like and dislike the most?
i really like the slight image of inside on the window
Give a caption to the person’s photograph
a window view
What can they do to make the photograph look better?
i think lamp light should be reduced

Dubaiwali · August 12, 2012, 8:19pm

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DA, darling could you check your PM please?

Dubaiwali · August 12, 2012, 8:20pm

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After everyone's done critiquing, I am going to give my inputs as well. I am happy to say, many of your thoughts match mine.

annie_bibi · August 12, 2012, 8:20pm

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SIDRA:
The pink color stands out
because it’s brightening up the greys in the background
it makes me think of a lady who loves her table tools:)
i like how the glass,plates and the napkins are in focus,despite so much of going on in the background
caption: pink is the new grey…(no i have no idea why i said that)
suggestion…hmm..the glass could have been in the center of the photo..would give bit of balance to the photo?

STA
what stands out?The waterdrops on the lemon
why?>The lemon pores stand out more with the waterdrops..and i so totally want that drop on the lowest leaf to fallllll right now
it makes me think of rain and how it would feel to pluck(?) off this lemon and smell it(yes!)
i like the way the green lemon n the leaves are in focus
not sure what i dislike
caption: jump into freshness(emmmmm?)
I’m not sure of what to really suggest…if the background wasnt hazyy like in the photo,then i’d say i want a hazy background…maybe this would be a suggestion going out for sidra…background could have been a litttle more hazy,but i guess the beauty of sidra’s photo was to let us see and imagine what else is going on in the BG.

devilish_angel · August 12, 2012, 8:24pm

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replied :)

Dubaiwali · August 12, 2012, 8:25pm

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Thank you.

annie_bibi · August 12, 2012, 8:38pm

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DA
what stands out the most? The cleanliness!
I dont know,but it seems like a very clean photo:)
it’s giving me a happy feeling when im looking at it for long..new shoes…new baby coming?
i like how the photo is focusing on just what needs to be focused…loving the dark floor background.
caption..coming soon.
maybe the shoes would have looked better from a different angle,but this one is perfect anyhow:)

Hmmna:
book stands out..
because it’s the center of the photo..almost the center(hehe)…i would have liked it if the book was placed more..centrally… then the rest of the subjects would come into focus too.
i like the bright colors
i think the extra canvas towards the left can be chopped off..then the picture can be balanced out.
Makes me feel…reading/studying doesnt always have to be boring…btw…PG Woodhouse i loved his short stories:)
Caption…Talking men…(not sure why i said that)
i would suggest the cover of the book could have been more focused…i cant read the title easily..otherwise…i think i like the photo and it’s elements..including the brightening up factors like the highlighters and the other book.

Dubaiwali · August 12, 2012, 8:48pm

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Thank you for the feedback students. I am going to post mine now. Then you get another assignment, which is related to the photos you all have uploaded.