ghum nahi bohlta bohlane se

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 25, 2002, 1:32am

ghum nahi bohlta bohlane se
nam hoee aank muskarane se

aaj woh ajnabee se lagtein hain
jantee hoon jene zamane se

dostoon ke pahrahk na karna
maan tote gaa azmanee se

jub se apnoo se choht kahee hai
koi sikwa nahi raha zamane se

zindagee ke haqeeqatoon ke qasam
dil ke batein hai bus fasane se

hope u like it:)

Jaan_Lewaa · November 25, 2002, 1:47am

Re: ghum nahi bohlta bohlane se

bhut khoob:k:

chand_chehra · November 25, 2002, 2:05am

Nice :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 25, 2002, 3:25am

thank guys:)

arifnawaz1 · November 25, 2002, 9:32am

GKK: Bahut hi zabardust :)

Kyon zindagi ki rah mein majbour ho gayee
itne howee qareeb ke hum door ho gayee

Aisa nahi ke humko koi bhi khushi nahi
Lekin yeh zindagi to koi zindagi nahi
kyon is ke feslyee humey manzor ho gayee

paya tumhey to hum ko laga tum ko kho deya
hum dil pee rooyee aur yeh dil hum pee roo deya
palkon se khuwb kyon gerey kyon chour ho gayee

kyon zindagi ki rah mein majbour ho gayee
itne howee qareeb ke hum door ho gayee

Muddi · November 25, 2002, 9:47am

Re: ghum nahi bohlta bohlane se

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

dostoon ke pahrahk na karna
maan tote gaa azmanee se

jub se apnoo se choht kahee hai
koi sikwa nahi raha zamane se

[/QUOTE]

Lovely.......................:) Buhat he Khub

Amal · November 25, 2002, 12:48pm

beautiful:):k:…thanx for sharing

nikii · November 25, 2002, 2:57pm

:) nice :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 25, 2002, 6:03pm

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 25, 2002, 7:45pm

thanks:) aur tumhare ghazal bhi kam nahi:k:
per khuwb dekhna nahi chahe.tote jateen hia:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 25, 2002, 7:49pm

thanks a lot

jaan lewaa
chand_chehra
arifnawaz
muddi
amal
nikii
heart hecker

arifnawaz1 · November 26, 2002, 12:31am

Toote huwe khwaaboon ne hum ko yeh sikhaaya hai
Dil ne jissay paaya thaa, aankhoon ne ganwaaya hai

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 26, 2002, 12:45am

:k:
khuwab dekhne he nahi thee aur phir lazmee nahi ke hamare khuwab pore hoon aur dil jo bhi mange woh mil jaein

arifnawaz1 · November 26, 2002, 1:28am

Yeh hamaari bad naseebi jo nahee tu aur kya hai
Ke ussi ke hogaye hum, jo na hosaka hamaara

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 26, 2002, 1:50am

kia baat hai:k:
mein yahaan phir kahoon gee majbooreian:)

arifnawaz1 · November 26, 2002, 5:29am

Jahan Phoolon Ko Khilna Tha Wahin Khiltay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha
Koi Aakar Humsay Pouchay Tumhian Kaisay Bhulaya Hai
Tumharay Khaat Ko Ashkoon Sai Shab-E-Gham Main Jalaya Hai
Hazaroon Zakham Aisay Hain Agar Sulagtay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha

Tumhain Jitna Bhulaya Hai Tumhari Yaad Aye Hai
Bahar-E-Nao Joo Ayee Hai Wohi Khushboo He Lai Hai
Tumharay Laab Meri Khatir Agar Hiltay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha

Jahan Phoolon Ko Khilna Tha Wahin Khiltay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 26, 2002, 7:58pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
Jahan Phoolon Ko Khilna Tha Wahin Khiltay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha
Koi Aakar Humsay Pouchay Tumhian Kaisay Bhulaya Hai
Tumharay Khaat Ko Ashkoon Sai Shab-E-Gham Main Jalaya Hai
Hazaroon Zakham Aisay Hain Agar Sulagtay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha

Tumhain Jitna Bhulaya Hai Tumhari Yaad Aye Hai
Bahar-E-Nao Joo Ayee Hai Wohi Khushboo He Lai Hai
Tumharay Laab Meri Khatir Agar Hiltay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha

Jahan Phoolon Ko Khilna Tha Wahin Khiltay Tu Acha Tha
Tumhi Ko Hum Nay Chaha Tha Tumhin Miltay Tu Acha Tha
[/QUOTE]

arif je mere diary se chore ke ap ne yeh ghazal;)
mein ne post karne thee:)
but thanks for ur ghazal.its one of my fav.
woh kehte hai na ke"aise qamoon mein aisa to hota hai";)

arifnawaz1 · November 26, 2002, 8:27pm

Kaise guzreyga yeh safar tanha
Hai gali aur rehguzar tanha

Aag phir aarzoo ki bharki hai
Dil sulagta hai raat bhar tanha

Zindagi se juda tu hona hai
Hai nikleyga dam magar tanha

Jab kabhi bhi qadam barhaaye hain
Khud ko paaya hai bekhabar tanha

Sun raha hoon faqat yeh shor-o-gul
Hai tau yeh zindagi, magar tanha

Hai shikaayat "Saahil" hontoo per
Zindagi kyon huwi basar tanha

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 27, 2002, 2:37am

:k:mein to ap ke poetery ke dewanee hote ja rahee hoon;)
ap ke bhi koi sathee ho gee yah phir hai jo ap ko tanha nahi chore gee:)us per aitebar ker ke to dekhain.
CHALO TO SAHEE AITEBAR BHI AA HE JAE GAA

arifnawaz1 · November 27, 2002, 8:31am

**
Hum ne apne armanoo ko aag lagaana seekh liya
Aag laga kar armanoon ki khaak uraana seekh liya

Khel kar sach se aankh micholi jab hum baazi haar gaye
Aankh se hum ne sachaaee ke aankh milaana seekh liya

Pyar mein pagal dil ke jab se hunsee uraee logoo ne
Chup ke chilman mein dil ki har baat chupaana seekh liya

Tootay khwaab ki kirchoon ne jab lahoo bahaaya aankhoon se
Khwaab mein khoye ankhoon ko din raat jagaana seekh liya

Patthar hogaee aankhain ab ta tak tak raah baharoon ki
Dard ke zard patton se humne is dil ko sajaana seekh liya

**