GHAZAL

Umm_Ahmed · February 24, 2008, 9:53am

                  katti nahin hy shaam chaly aaiye zaraa...
                  hujaay apni baat, chaly aaiye zaraa...
                 zid karraha hy dil issy samjhaiye zaraa
                    hon men bari odaas,chaly aaiye zaraa.
                  sooraj ki saari kirnen sona luta rahi hen
                  sargoshiyaan hawa ki naghmy suna rahi hen
                    chaya hy  ik khumaar chaly aaiye zaraa.....
                 ye shaam ye haseen pal,khushbo shafaq ki lali
                  tum bin,magar ay jaanam by naam si odaasi 
                     be kal hoi hon aaj chaly aaiye zaraa....
                  musam ki dil kashi ab aankhon ko chubh rahi hy
                  ashkon k sab sitaary aankhon men khub rahy hen..
                    khadshy hen be shumaar chaly aaiye zaraa...
                    ye shaan e be niyaazi jaany du jaany janaa..
                   jeeny ka hu bahana,khuabon ka hu khazanaa
                    hu jaay khud py naaz chaly aaiye zaraa...
                           (s.naz)

Jhanjharewali · February 24, 2008, 10:49am

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what lovely work! it creates such a strong tasavvur. one can feel the anticipation, the restlessness, the khumaar. its evocative. me liked plenty :)

chaly aaiye zara!!

Aryaan · February 25, 2008, 12:13pm

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Beautiful sharing Umm..:k:

muddii · February 25, 2008, 12:21pm

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Nice post:)

NikamiJano · February 25, 2008, 9:42pm

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v nice sharing Umm :)

Shab-e-Hijar · February 25, 2008, 11:14pm

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aww so lovely :)

Precious_Khan · February 25, 2008, 11:46pm

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:k:

reet · February 26, 2008, 6:01am

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lovely.....!

Zakhmi_Umar · February 26, 2008, 2:14pm

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buhat khoob :k: